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Do you everhave those moments
When you can't stand being inside your own skin
for another second?
When you know that if you have to see yourself
feel yourself
be yourself
for even another moment
you'll just explode?
When everything about you is aggravating
and nothing is right?
When you know that you'll never
meet someone you could hate
more than you hate yourself?
I do.
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Comments: 16
Underground-Rogue [2008-11-01 12:52:42 +0000 UTC]
This is very nice.
I have those days a lot. But they're sometimes worth it, you know? Because those moments when you actually like being you... they're amazing, especially after moments when you don't...
Rambling now.
But good poem.
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tinyplaidninja [2008-06-13 05:11:42 +0000 UTC]
oh sad...
but i like it! i especially like how you did the line breaking.
yay for jelly!
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blameXmyself In reply to tinyplaidninja [2008-06-13 15:56:27 +0000 UTC]
thanks :]
it was more of a rant in my head, but i decided it would be a cool poem lol
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tinyplaidninja In reply to blameXmyself [2008-06-14 17:26:26 +0000 UTC]
welcomes!
well rants always work. i think i have one poem like that, but i hid it away in my files on word and i don't wanna have to look at it again. but this one worked.
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blameXmyself In reply to tinyplaidninja [2008-06-14 17:29:22 +0000 UTC]
lol mine are usually rants
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tinyplaidninja In reply to blameXmyself [2008-06-14 17:33:12 +0000 UTC]
heehee well you have good rants, so it makes it ok.
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MutePoetess In reply to blameXmyself [2008-06-13 21:22:00 +0000 UTC]
rants usually do make really good poems, just by adding the linebreaks and such. really good job on the writing of this one, but it is so sad! but yeah, I have those days too. and I guess I'm not one to talk about writing sad poetry lol
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blameXmyself In reply to MutePoetess [2008-06-13 21:35:38 +0000 UTC]
lol i think everyone has those days
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MutePoetess In reply to blameXmyself [2008-06-13 21:54:56 +0000 UTC]
yup those days are definitely sucky. the kind where you just want to crawl back in bed under your covers and curl up and stay in the dark forever. good thing they don't happen to often lol <3
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blameXmyself In reply to MutePoetess [2008-06-13 21:58:32 +0000 UTC]
ya its worse when they happen halfway through the day :[ :] <3
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MutePoetess In reply to blameXmyself [2008-06-13 22:04:46 +0000 UTC]
yeah those do kind of suck =[ =]
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