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I want to return to a timewhen a kiss meant something
more than just a formality
When lovers held hands
and exchanged sweet glances
instead of harsh words
When memories were cherished
and a single red rose
was more beautiful than any diamond
When 'I Love You' was never a lie
promises were made to be kept
and happily ever after wasn't just for fairytales
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Comments: 8
Tige321 [2008-10-17 02:05:44 +0000 UTC]
You totally need to publish a book full of these. ;_;
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MutePoetess [2008-09-07 22:01:20 +0000 UTC]
yup it's all the blood that rushes to your head ^_^ lol
really, really good writing. the third stanza is my favorite (my rose obsession prevails again lol) but I also really like the last stanza, especially "promises were made to be kept" because promises aren't really promises anymore it seems =[
sad but good
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blameXmyself In reply to MutePoetess [2008-09-07 22:15:31 +0000 UTC]
totally :]
thanks Cassie :]
I know, promises kinda died :/
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tinyplaidninja [2008-09-07 19:59:00 +0000 UTC]
being upsidedown. LOL.
aw, i like it! i really like the first and last stanzas especially.
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blameXmyself In reply to tinyplaidninja [2008-09-07 21:23:31 +0000 UTC]
haha you know it helps :]
thanks amb!
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tinyplaidninja In reply to blameXmyself [2008-09-07 22:02:40 +0000 UTC]
it's true. maybe i should try it some time.
welcomes!
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