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Published: 2008-09-26 05:31:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description if i could
i'd capture all your pain
the broken angels' wings
stabbing at your heart
your lungs
stealing the breath from your body
fleeing with your life
never to return
i'd chase them down
take back the peices of you
i've missed so much
put you together again
my own way
and then you'd always be mine
the thread that keeps you whole
sewn in place by my pale fingers
you'd be my finest creation
my favorite masterpiece
forever my patchwork doll
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Comments: 9

Tige321 [2008-11-09 03:18:06 +0000 UTC]

*glomps poem*

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blameXmyself In reply to Tige321 [2008-11-09 18:57:30 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks

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MutePoetess [2008-09-27 00:31:58 +0000 UTC]

oh this is beautifully written Joelle
i love how the title fits with it
good job =]

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blameXmyself In reply to MutePoetess [2008-09-27 01:37:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks :]
the hardest part of this was probably the title lol

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MutePoetess In reply to blameXmyself [2008-09-27 01:54:05 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome =]

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mayelaine [2008-09-26 05:32:57 +0000 UTC]

mm.. very sweet. i like this. good work

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blameXmyself In reply to mayelaine [2008-09-26 05:34:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks :]

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mayelaine In reply to blameXmyself [2008-09-26 05:35:53 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome!
i like how you wrote about stiches. its very unique. ive never read anything like it. :-P

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blameXmyself In reply to mayelaine [2008-09-26 05:43:26 +0000 UTC]

well I'm glad it was something new and different :]

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