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Her body lay across the counter in a pained, perfect angle.Her flawless black hair rested behind her as she rested her beautiful face on her arm, her hand dangling off the counter.
The beautiful face was focused on what rested in her other hand. The bottle of Stolichnaya glistened in the sunlight,
Just like the tears that streaked the face where the sunlight rested.
It was a nearly empty bottle, but she loved the way the sun would burn her eyes as it cast through the glass.
Those dazzling blue eyes wanted to close and drift off to be with the one that was gone.
She didn't remember the last time that she even blinked.
She did though that she hated missing him.
How long before he would return? Her lips met the bottle's. The colorless, warm liquid sliding down her throat.
What if he never came back? A longer drink from the Russian vodka made her wince aloud.
Does he remember her? She drained the bottle. Not a single drop landed on the counter that her numbed body lay across.
She held the empty bottle of Russia's finest in her hand,
wondering how she could still hurt after downing the entire bottle.
Sure it had taken her four hours to do it, but she did it.
Her blue eyes glanced past the bottle and at the clock on the stove. It was only 3:00 AM.
If she had had the strength, the hand that held the bottle would have thrown it at the blinking green numbers.
She moaned in disgust as she finally shut those pretty blue eyes.
This was only Day One.
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Comments: 8
HugQueen [2010-04-28 20:50:54 +0000 UTC]
Intense; you can just feel the emotion and pain. Lovely job.
Thank you so much for sharing this piece with our group, #dALinkSystem ! <3
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BipolarBearDisorder [2010-04-24 13:59:10 +0000 UTC]
Lost in love and lost in life, this story of a girl with a broken heart, who tries to fill in the holes in her life with Russian alcohol, is both beautiful and amazing, sublime and sad.
The emotions this girl feels, wallowing in self-pity with a bottle of vodka in one hand, her drifting soul in the other, really hits home.
What an amazing read! *wipes tear*
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blamiz In reply to BipolarBearDisorder [2010-04-24 17:33:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it.
They way you look at it though was different than that of others, and I'm happy that I can have people look at it from different aspects.
She sounds so beautiful and perfect, doesn't she? And I can almost feel her depression.
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BipolarBearDisorder In reply to blamiz [2010-04-24 18:35:03 +0000 UTC]
What's so amazing about writing is how people can interpret pieces in different ways, adding their own experiences and perspectives in the piece.
All in all, this really is a fantastic piece.
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blamiz In reply to BipolarBearDisorder [2010-04-25 21:19:38 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you think so.
You'll definately be seeing more of her ^^
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cekario [2010-04-22 20:51:09 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful! The description, the emotion. Short written, enjoyable to read, and with hidden meaning. Perfect.
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