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blamiz — The Moment After
Published: 2011-03-15 15:28:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 277; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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Description I've pissed on a stick, but it was always negative before.
This time it was different. It was emotions galore.
Happiness melted the sadness.
Sanity melted the madness.
Remorse erased by a new found affection
Disappointment evaporated by a future perfection.
There was so much all at once that tears spilled over.
Sitting on the toilet, my life instantly became sober.
I stared at the double line.
Whatever is inside me is mine.
So many emotions, and now I'm expectant.
I will never forget the moment after I found out I was pregnant.
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Comments: 13

AnksMusicForTheSoul [2011-03-28 12:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!
I wish you and your baby all the happiness!

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spastic666 [2011-03-17 18:05:29 +0000 UTC]

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blamiz In reply to spastic666 [2011-03-17 20:11:55 +0000 UTC]

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spastic666 In reply to blamiz [2011-03-21 17:48:32 +0000 UTC]

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toBea-or-not-toBea [2011-03-16 18:12:14 +0000 UTC]

I love the subject you have used to explore The Moment After. A brilliant ,emotional poem with a great range and use of beautiful language.

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blamiz In reply to toBea-or-not-toBea [2011-03-17 16:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.
Being pregnant has really inspired me to continue writing.
(:

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toBea-or-not-toBea In reply to blamiz [2011-03-17 20:18:55 +0000 UTC]

No problem, it must be wonderful to have a child.

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blamiz In reply to toBea-or-not-toBea [2011-03-19 17:38:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm almost halfway through my pregnancy, and the bond between me and the fetus, is already so strong that it's tear jerking (:

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toBea-or-not-toBea In reply to blamiz [2011-03-21 21:54:36 +0000 UTC]

It sounds like a wonderful experience

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blamiz In reply to toBea-or-not-toBea [2011-03-21 22:17:52 +0000 UTC]

It is <3

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toBea-or-not-toBea In reply to blamiz [2011-03-22 16:16:28 +0000 UTC]

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pullingcandy [2011-03-15 21:15:33 +0000 UTC]

-happy smile-

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blamiz In reply to pullingcandy [2011-03-15 23:36:02 +0000 UTC]

(:

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