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Published: 2010-04-23 08:03:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 5349; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 23
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Description Ahah. So yeah. It's a little bit late, I know, but this page was fighting being made. Plus: New school year started, and for some reason, my bosses actually want me to teach or something. It's like they think I'm a teacher.... Oh wait. >_> .... crap. -_- BUT REGARDLESS! If you hadn't figured it out by now, that last page was one, bit APRIL FOOLS joke. Ha HAH. I am funny, no?

No?

Ok, well I thought it was funny. >_>; You can be safe in knowing that I will endevor to keep all Mary Sues and OC's out of EE. Should I ever slip up, I have ~rainrach who is my friend and not yours to slap me firmly across the face. So YES. Amber Jimaine Sefton is NOT going to be joining EE, and is NOT going to be the cousin of Amanda, and is NOT going to be in the middle of a love triangle between Pietro and Kurt. Because that would be stupid.

The page BEFORE it is still EE!canon though. "Wait!" You're thinking (yes, I can hear what you're thinking. ... pervert). "What about Kurt and Amanda? What happened there? Did I miss something?" The answer, dear reader, is no, you did not. My li'l April Fools joke just happened to fall in sort of an AWKWARD place in the script, where there was about to be a scene jump anyway. THE SCENE HAS CHANGED. Yet you do not know what Amanda wanted to talk about.

If you want to know what all was up with that, you'll just have to keep reading until I get back to it

Which IS actually slated to happen before the end of this chapter


As for right now... I wanted to try something new, visual-story-telling wise, by trying to show two scenes happening simultaneously. The problem with this is, of course, that I am nooooot so much of what you would call a "good" writer, so the next three pages are a bit... hackneyed, at best >.> Mea culpa, I'll try to get through it fast.


And hey- speaking of this page:

You know what I love about drawing Scott and Kurt? Not having to draw pupils. Fucking. Loveit. Loooooveiitttttt


Meanwhile, I also offer up the most fanservicey fanservice to fanservice this comic since Toad's ass in the medlabs. Being of the female persuasion myself, I clearly know that we girls FREQUENTLY style each other's hair in our underwear. It's only NATURAL. .... Right ladies?


Actually, I think it's just my brain rebelling after having to draw everyone in winter clothes for two years >.> HOLY CRAP it's been two years?! Yeah. Two years. -_-


If you love me, gimmie a llama?




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Comments: 35

syd23GR [2010-09-02 07:29:57 +0000 UTC]

hey is there more it's is great stuff

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karai100 [2010-08-10 15:57:38 +0000 UTC]

when you give next part??

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BlazeRocket In reply to karai100 [2010-08-10 17:13:34 +0000 UTC]

Just as SOON as I have a scanner again :<

I'm currently without. It's very sadden making. Especially because this update has been waiting since, like, MAY or something o.o

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karai100 In reply to BlazeRocket [2010-08-11 06:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Oki x3 I'll be waiting ^u^

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ShadowRoze [2010-08-06 17:26:25 +0000 UTC]

Love it! MORE MORE MORE MORE

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Panda-Otome [2010-07-10 20:58:07 +0000 UTC]

I want moaaaaar D:

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Mystique84 [2010-06-18 18:20:24 +0000 UTC]

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

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ThePast [2010-06-16 14:08:46 +0000 UTC]

! I thought I had left a comment here, but looking through the pages, I WAS WRONG!

Obviously I had told you in IM when this went up, but it needs to be recordeded here too.... Kitty's face is FRICKING amazing in this!

For me, this has to be the best fan drawn version I have seen of her! Even with her hair 'up', it just encapsulates Kitty for me, summing up how I feel about her. Her close up in this is just perfection of the character ^_^

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kyokofoxruby [2010-06-05 16:33:20 +0000 UTC]

arg why did i click on the link

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BlazeRocket In reply to kyokofoxruby [2010-06-06 00:47:15 +0000 UTC]

O_o What link are you talking about?

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kyokofoxruby In reply to BlazeRocket [2010-06-07 02:27:52 +0000 UTC]

someoneposted a link to prof.X derssed as frank'n'furter

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rainrach [2010-05-08 04:03:40 +0000 UTC]

WHEW! Sorry for the delay in critique. You know me, busy busy busy lazy. I mean, busy. ;;

I really like the dark ink line under the chins. It really makes the faces pop and come forward. I also enjoy the pile of laundry that Kurt and Scott are doing in the first panel. THAT IS SOME CLOTHES THERE. UH-HUH. And Kitty's room is AWESOME, okay? OKAY. I love all the little details on her vanity and the sharp lines of the background windows.

Now, to be a bitch. First panel, the laundry machines...what happened? Kitty has this wonderfully detailed vanity and you can't put KNOBS on the laundry machines? The TINIEST bit more detail than the square-and-circle situation we've got going on? I can OBVIOUSLY still tell what they are, but I wish that we had a bit more detail, it's clearly not matching the detail we see later on. I'd like that consistency...and for it to be consistently detailed more than...not. Also, and I know I'm kind of a Nazi about this but, perspective. Scott looks like his legs would be too short for how he's standing near that table. Kurt's bent-weird legs are probably fine, but Scott looks like he's a little cut off. He needs to be taller in that panel, maybe could've used a 3rd point for perspective? (CAUSE WE ALL LOVE THAT SO) I'm not sure.

On a writer note: "so" is the ending word for THREE LINES IN A ROW. Maybe that was intentional. It leaves a bit of a bad taste on the tongue for me, though. You...probably don't want writer-tips, as you've said you're not a writer. So. Moving on. (IF YOU WANT THEM...YOU KNOW WHERE TO GET THEM.)

I love panel 4. I love it. Other than the MINOR issue of not being able to tell it's Kitty, which I think is pretty deduce-able, is great. You totally know she's getting her hair done and her face is alight with excitement. Also, those pictures, super nifty.

Part of me LOVES that you made their bodies more "natural" looking. With their thicker thighs and calves and uncomfortable-looking brief-panties. So...realistic in that way. Another part of me wishes you had FAN SERVICED THE CRAP OUT OF THIS PAGE. Not necessarily boobs to high heavens, but perfect slender slight curves and all that. >___>; That's just me though. You know, keep doing what you're doing as the itty bitty titty committee gets ready for a night out. But. Just throwin' that out there. Fan service with Jean and Rogue mebbe?

And some random critiques. Tangents: Kitty's bra strap in panel 4 goes STRAIGHT INTO the closet door line in panel 5, the mirror line and closet door line also match up fairly well. Moving them slightly to one side or the other will clearly fix this. Watch the ellipses on Kitty's circle...seat...thing...whatever that's called.

I, too, was a little like, "wait, what? Transition?!" between the Kurt and Amanda to the Kurt and Scott page. It's a little jarring honestly. There's not even a "Later..." caption somewhere. I digress, that's another writerly issue.

I enjoy this page though, we're gettin' into so plot, oh yeah. But...WHERE'S AMBER?! That was a joke?! ! I LIKED AMBER, what's wrong with you?! How could you, you're mean! ;.;! I'm never speaking to you again!

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BlazeRocket In reply to rainrach [2010-05-08 06:03:21 +0000 UTC]

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RelwarcTheMighty [2010-05-02 03:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Fanservice and bunnyslippers make me a happy trooper.

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BlazeRocket In reply to RelwarcTheMighty [2010-05-02 03:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Those are the bunny slippers I wanted to give Professor X

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RelwarcTheMighty In reply to BlazeRocket [2010-05-04 04:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Well, at least it wasn't the Prof and fanservice together. *shudders*

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BlazeRocket In reply to RelwarcTheMighty [2010-05-04 13:19:50 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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RelwarcTheMighty In reply to BlazeRocket [2010-05-05 07:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Well, that'll fill up a couple of therapy sessions for me.

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BlazeRocket In reply to RelwarcTheMighty [2010-05-05 13:02:34 +0000 UTC]

I know of other pictures, if you think your therapist needs more to do XD

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RelwarcTheMighty In reply to BlazeRocket [2010-05-06 03:28:32 +0000 UTC]

She works hard enough.

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CyberLycantrophy [2010-04-24 09:10:04 +0000 UTC]

You can have all the Llamas and Alpachas (sp?) in the world for including Rahne in the last panel I don't know why, but for some reason that ill-raised, dogmatic, naive girl is my favourite.

Guess I just like seeing a religious character in X-men that's written better than Kurt.

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BlazeRocket In reply to CyberLycantrophy [2010-04-24 09:14:29 +0000 UTC]

Rahne's adorable. She's in my top three favourite New Recruits, which may be why I try to sneak her in so much ^_^;

Just out of curiosity, how do you pronounce her name?

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CyberLycantrophy In reply to BlazeRocket [2010-04-27 02:40:28 +0000 UTC]

RAYN as in English "rain." At least it is so according to the comic books. I still say it "Raw-nay" out of old habit from time to time as I used to read it that way.

The timid, religious redhead invokes such big brother instinct.

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BlazeRocket In reply to CyberLycantrophy [2010-04-27 03:04:33 +0000 UTC]

I always read it as "rain," but then I they called her "raw-ne" in one episode of Evo so I was like "buwah?" I habitually pronounce MOST things wrong, so I'm always currious. ^.^

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CyberLycantrophy In reply to BlazeRocket [2010-04-27 15:42:13 +0000 UTC]

Evo I really wanted her to have more on-screen time. They are the first animated series to give her lines. Still hoping for an animated series that could flesh out the more obscure characters. What is it with obscure characters that makes them attractive to fandom?

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BlazeRocket In reply to CyberLycantrophy [2010-04-27 22:40:17 +0000 UTC]

They aren't given much established background, so we can give them one that we like ourselves.

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bloodandwarwolf [2010-04-24 01:38:13 +0000 UTC]

damn those new students and school years. lol. hope you can juggle teaching and this!

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valeriadgarcia [2010-04-23 22:19:38 +0000 UTC]

, i didn't remember the last page so i was like [insert retarded face here]. I've never done anyone's hair in my underwear.....nor vice-versa. Maybe its a cultural thing or something xD.

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CatalogCats [2010-04-23 22:08:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Kitty's face in panel 4... let's say that if I saw anyone making that face, I'd be worried. XD

So this is Jean's big plan? Um, go Jean, I guess, but I predict this not ending well. *waiting for chaos to ensue*

And good that the last page was an april fool's joke. You're right, it is in kind of an awkward spot.

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Cupcak3Bby [2010-04-23 12:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Like the fanservice panel, it's cute ^___^
And hair in underwear becomes a bad idea when Straighteners are involved DX (lol I know from experience)

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HarpieKeket [2010-04-23 10:41:07 +0000 UTC]

You're damn RIGHT we chicks do our hair and make-up in our underwear!

And nice joke, btw. Had me going 'WTF?' while reading this

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neoPootling [2010-04-23 09:32:39 +0000 UTC]

i genuinely think the fanservicey panel is cute hehe ^^

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BlazeRocket In reply to neoPootling [2010-04-23 09:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thanks ^.^ I appreciate that.

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miraxterrik [2010-04-23 09:16:51 +0000 UTC]

is that Kitty in panel 4? My bad if i dont recognize. The sudden jump surprised me but it's okay.

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BlazeRocket In reply to miraxterrik [2010-04-23 09:39:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Kitty, with Amara brushing her hair. ^_^; It's Rahne and Jubes on the bed

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