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"Your highness, we risk invasion every day unless we act now. We need to form alliances and prepare our soldiers." The deep voice of the man, standing on the opposite side of the massive old wooden table made Leander look up from the map he had been studying.Searchingly the prince met the steady gaze of Blueregad, his guardian. Unlike most people in Leander's presence this man did not avert his eyes.
With a soft sigh the prince turned his attention back to the map that showed Irrandr and its neighbors, a soft rustling of feathers when Leander stretched his wing.
"It doesn't look good does it?" He asked with a dim weariness in his voice.
"No it doesn't your majesty" Blueregad agreed and bent over the map as well.
"We can safely assume that we are safe from the south, the largest threat comes from the east but I fear that others might grasp the opportunity to expand their borders."
He clipped his shimmering wings as he spoke, delivering the information in his usual matter-of-facts voice.
"I sent a letter to the west, but they are asking for too much of our recourses. Forming such an alliance would be the same as surrender." Leander's voice sounded weary and tense.
With a frustrated groan he left his spot by the table and went to stand by the window, the sharp eyes of the guardian followed his every move carefully but the man remained silent.
Outside the sun was setting.
Deep in thought he placed his hand on the cold stone wall beside the window and drummed his fingertips absentmindedly on the hard material. For a long time Leander stood there by the window, letting his mind wander, motionless except for the drumming of his fingertips and an occasional rustling of feathers as he adjusted his wing.
Suddenly his hand went still and he spun around, eyes blazing with determination.
"We'll have to continue this meeting another time Blue. There is something important I have to do."
After announcing the end of the meeting he strode across the room to the door and flung it open. In the same moment he heard a squeal, a heavy thump and shattering of porcelain.
Surprised Leander stepped outside the room and perked behind the door.
"I'm sorry Rex. I didn't know you where there. Are you hurt?"
He asked and reached out a hand to help her up.
She looked up at him blushing and with a shameful look on her face, but she quickly turned her gaze away. With his help Rex got to her feet.
"I'm so sorry!" She blurted. "I was gonna serve you tea but..." Her voice trailed off and she went silent.
"Don't worry about it" The prince said and patted her friendly on the head before turning and hurrying down the hall in the direction of his study, leaving Rex and Blueregad starring after him.
In the study Leander paced back and forth by the window. The candles where already lit and the quill lay by the parchment on the desk, waiting patiently to be picked up.
On the floor lay a big siamur curled up and watched him steadily with his sharp eyes for a while but when nothing of interest seemed to happen he opened his beak and yawned, he lay his head on his front paws, closed his eyes and soon fell asleep.
The prince continued his restless wandering, glancing at the desk every now and then.
After a while he finally sat down and picked up the quill, dipped it in the ink and begun writing the letter.
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Comments: 33
tayleaf [2013-11-22 22:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! Good use of descriptive words! Towards the end, is "In the study Leander phased back and forth by the window." supposed to say "Phased" or "Paced"? I wasn't sure, with magical beings present, phasing back and forth might actually be what you meant. XD
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to tayleaf [2013-11-25 12:23:28 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
And you where absolutely right. I meant paces, thank you for pointing that out XD
I'm glad that you like it despite that little error XD
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tayleaf In reply to BlazingFlameGraphics [2013-11-25 19:20:05 +0000 UTC]
No problem! Haha, when you get to typing quickly it is so easy to make mistakes, and since it was another actual word, spellcheck wouldn't of caught it. XD Its no prob :3 Great story!
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to tayleaf [2013-11-25 20:14:14 +0000 UTC]
Very true, and English is not my main language either so I easily do such mistakes. But it is thanks to comments like yours I learn XD
Normally I ask a friend to read it through so that she can check grammar and spelling and such but this was just meant as a quick thing for fun and for using some of my characters=3
Thank you! <3
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World-Inside-Me [2013-11-21 19:52:40 +0000 UTC]
This is a really fantastic story! I love how you've included these wonderful characters - introducing them all superbly and giving us details about their actions and personalities. I can't help but want more descriptions of the characters though so that I can imagine them more clearly (and I know I have seen what they all look like, but others won't have ). I love the suspense in this piece too, and especially the sort of questioning cliff hanger that this finishes on. Will a war start? Who is he writing too? Why is he under attack?
I love how you've described the Prince's actions too, especially with the way he drums his fingertips on the wall - he sounds so amazing! *.* I love Bluregad as well~ I really hope you will do more to this because I really love it~!
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to World-Inside-Me [2013-11-22 08:34:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
When I write things fast, things that aren't meant to be... serious is the wrong word, but things that are more ant to be just something quick I tend not to add descriptions. I realize I have to bet better at it though.
And I am so happy that you like it. If it will be a next part to this we'll see, but I do have an idea for where I wanna use these characters again, and perhaps a few more. It feels good to be writing again
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World-Inside-Me In reply to BlazingFlameGraphics [2013-11-22 10:42:06 +0000 UTC]
No problem~
Oh, I understand! That makes a lot of sense really~
I'm glad you're writing again too and I look forward to any writing you do! I can't wait to see more of these characters~
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to World-Inside-Me [2013-12-15 20:04:35 +0000 UTC]
I am glad it does to someone XD
I seriously hope I can show you lots more of them. I want to write a whole series of thick novels about them
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World-Inside-Me In reply to BlazingFlameGraphics [2013-12-15 20:08:32 +0000 UTC]
I would really love to read those! They would be truly amazing!
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to World-Inside-Me [2013-12-15 20:13:47 +0000 UTC]
I would love to read them too! But I might actually have a plot that I can use for a long writing project
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World-Inside-Me In reply to BlazingFlameGraphics [2013-12-15 20:14:33 +0000 UTC]
Yayyy! *runs to skype to get you to tell me about it*
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to World-Inside-Me [2013-12-15 20:57:49 +0000 UTC]
I did tell you did you get dissapointed?
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World-Inside-Me In reply to BlazingFlameGraphics [2013-12-15 21:01:07 +0000 UTC]
No I didn't! I WANNA READ IT.... I think you should write it~
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to World-Inside-Me [2013-12-15 21:03:22 +0000 UTC]
and I will try! I am making the group of travelers in my head! I need a pathfinder!
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World-Inside-Me In reply to BlazingFlameGraphics [2013-12-15 21:03:47 +0000 UTC]
Yayyayaayya! THAT'S BRILLIANT!
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to World-Inside-Me [2013-12-15 21:06:49 +0000 UTC]
thank you! I wanna have a billboard to pin things to so I can keep track of things
I'll tell you when I have things a little more lined out
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World-Inside-Me In reply to BlazingFlameGraphics [2013-12-15 22:08:19 +0000 UTC]
That would be an amazing idea! You should totally do it~
yay! I can't wait to hear more about it~
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to World-Inside-Me [2013-12-16 07:44:28 +0000 UTC]
I need to get a billboard first XD Perhaps I'll just pin stuff on my wall... I'll see
You are the first I tell!
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World-Inside-Me In reply to BlazingFlameGraphics [2013-12-16 19:35:55 +0000 UTC]
I look forward to seeing this project come to life ^-^
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to World-Inside-Me [2013-12-16 19:44:15 +0000 UTC]
I hope it will come to life
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World-Inside-Me In reply to BlazingFlameGraphics [2013-12-16 19:46:49 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure it will!
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to World-Inside-Me [2013-12-16 19:52:13 +0000 UTC]
You are right
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Syaraa [2013-11-21 19:42:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh my O_O you have adopted so amaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing adopts that are too pretty to the one u adopt from me.It was an honor one of mine joined ur story ;o;
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to Syaraa [2013-11-21 20:35:34 +0000 UTC]
don't say that! Rex is just as amazing as any of them! And she is so amazing to work with! Im so happy i got her <3
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Syaraa In reply to BlazingFlameGraphics [2013-11-21 21:03:28 +0000 UTC]
awwww you so sweet <3 <3
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to Syaraa [2013-11-21 19:41:43 +0000 UTC]
she only got a small part this time, but we are gonna see more of her in the future =3
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Syaraa In reply to BlazingFlameGraphics [2013-11-21 20:01:00 +0000 UTC]
<3 <3 you are so good in writing a story <3 and m
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BlazingFlameGraphics In reply to Syaraa [2013-11-21 20:40:09 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much! I'm glad that you think so <3
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