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Published: 2006-03-27 05:54:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 12
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i dragged silence back to my roomtook off its apparel and found truths
made love to the lies made love to the moment
found myself again after the third orgasm
i traded his femur for her clavicle
the first place my lips declared she's mine
she wasn't just another girl
made me question myself for what i believe
and she suceeded
put her hand on where he robbed my heart
took away my pain looked deep into my soul
we breathed in harmony the sweetest symphony
bit my lips forbit myself to cry
but her fingers were ready to catch each tears
i traded his kiss for her smile
the first light showing the way in the dark
tracing her skin under the curl
made me shiver feeling cold under the sun
and i surrendered
breathing on my neck where he kissed me
sucked away my misery took me back to reality
she gave me her fire the greatest warmth of all
bit my lips but somehow i still cried
and it was nirvana when i caught her tears
i dragged reality back to my room
took off its apparel and find doubt
made love to the faith made love to the patience
found myself again after the third orgasm
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Comments: 26
Cattyonines [2006-04-19 13:25:40 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is really good. It's written so beautifully.
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bleedingbride In reply to Cattyonines [2006-04-19 14:54:22 +0000 UTC]
Owwwww.. thanks a lot honey... thanks for all your supports until this point... how are you?
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Cattyonines In reply to bleedingbride [2006-04-20 17:31:36 +0000 UTC]
your welcome. I'm super, great! Yourself?
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bleedingbride In reply to Cattyonines [2006-04-21 13:48:15 +0000 UTC]
im doing fine i guess... i always love your avatar.. ahhahaha
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munkinsane [2006-03-30 19:54:36 +0000 UTC]
Awww....Dalem >__👍: 0 ⏩: 1
bleedingbride In reply to munkinsane [2006-03-31 01:33:18 +0000 UTC]
hihiiihiihi... makasih lohhhhh
hehe signature lo lucu
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munkinsane In reply to bleedingbride [2006-03-31 09:28:30 +0000 UTC]
ahahahah "Lucu" yah ^_^
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boykiller [2006-03-29 11:21:58 +0000 UTC]
this has a lot to say...i like it nor...btw thx...hehe
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bleedingbride In reply to boykiller [2006-03-29 11:49:47 +0000 UTC]
thx for what?
u like it? good good.. hehehehe
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boykiller In reply to bleedingbride [2006-03-29 16:24:54 +0000 UTC]
for the poet list eheheh
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sweet-sangria [2006-03-28 15:37:33 +0000 UTC]
i traded his kiss for her smile
now that says a whole lot
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bleedingbride In reply to sweet-sangria [2006-03-29 05:22:52 +0000 UTC]
hahahahahahaha... but i'll kiss you tho... just like nana kissed hachi (this japanese manga im addicted to)
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bleedingbride In reply to sweet-sangria [2006-03-29 22:46:33 +0000 UTC]
gila ah.. entar gosip lagi
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pekthong [2006-03-27 11:35:09 +0000 UTC]
" put her hand on where he robbed my heart
took away my pain looked deep into my soul
we breathed in harmony the sweetest symphony
bit my lips forbit myself to cry
but her fingers were ready to catch each tears "
wow.. very powerful poetry! u are very good!
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bleedingbride In reply to pekthong [2006-03-27 12:26:28 +0000 UTC]
awwwwwww thats so nice of you
glad you find it powerful.. so glad you enjoy it
thanks
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pekthong In reply to bleedingbride [2006-03-29 20:06:42 +0000 UTC]
ur welcome
are u a writer?
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bleedingbride In reply to pekthong [2006-03-29 22:46:07 +0000 UTC]
im actually more to a manipulator... ive browsed through your gallery.. you've got nice stuffs in there
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pekthong In reply to bleedingbride [2006-04-03 19:34:05 +0000 UTC]
owhh i see... so are u working now?
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bleedingbride In reply to pekthong [2006-04-03 22:05:38 +0000 UTC]
working as in.. ? im a uni student, if thats what ur asking
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pekthong In reply to bleedingbride [2006-04-04 05:53:00 +0000 UTC]
ooohh... are u indonesian?
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bleedingbride In reply to pekthong [2006-04-04 06:15:25 +0000 UTC]
yeap i am
hehhehehe... how bout u?
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bleedingbride In reply to pekthong [2006-04-05 06:45:30 +0000 UTC]
waddya mean unknown? hahahaha you're mix or sth? or are you too westernised.. ahhahahah that happens all the time
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