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Description to learn that i left the bigger scar on you
that i stole more peace from your nights
that i sent a thunder over your brunette angel
i am glad

i was a fool to believe that the gasps are synchronous
whats to read between the lines?
that were never there
so i tighten my bodice and hold my chin up
you wont find the traces of the pearls
dear sire, i was once at your service
but emaciation brought a new emancipation
you would never believe

between the red crosses that line the green arrows
the emptiness became meaningless
souls that surround me every now and then
the strangers became familiar faces
and i realised
i dont need you anymore
so dug up a hole and stay inside

to learn that i finally shoke the ground beneath you
i am glad
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sweet-sangria [2007-06-29 08:05:26 +0000 UTC]

critique not desired but I love this piece. (I know I'm a little late, reading this now)

to learn that i left the bigger scar on you >> the truth is, it is possible that I left a bigger scar on him, but I keep it a secret so he doesn't know. now the fact that he doesn't know makes me feel like he left a bigger scar on me.

I want to shook his ground.

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bleedingbride In reply to sweet-sangria [2007-06-29 13:03:31 +0000 UTC]

you need to believe that whatever secret you keep or not keep from him does not matter. the stronger one always leaves the bigger scar. im serious. when i told him i was really upset because of him before, i made him sad. i made him upset. but i told him that because i wanted to hurt him. because i wanted to feel strong. i hope we can shake his ground. he shall be really scared. im coming back

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