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Published: 2004-02-02 06:04:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 211; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 41
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Description She lay pleasantly stoned on her bed, clad in nothing but a striped halter & her favourite pair of black undies. Fragma - Take This World For Real. The cool weather & the sweet crisp silence of the morning injects a simple satisfaction into her veins. All I'm missing is you.

She closes her eyes & sinks into her own little world of happy thoughts. Happy thoughts. Happy thoughts. She likes happy thoughts. Slipping out of consciousness. Slipping into unconsciousness. Slip out. Slip into me.

"Hello Puddles. I love you little ducky wucky." & she plants a kiss on the plush duckling's bill. "Oh you are so cute. You make me so happy. You make me so..."

She notices the vertical wounds down her wrists. Red liquid starts to trickle down to her elbows, staining her clothes. She drops Puddles. It's hurting me. You're hurting me. I'm hurting myself.

"No! No! No! Why is this happening? Why is this happening to me?" She screams & throws everything off her bed. She starts clawing at wounds. "Go away. Go away. Please. Make it go away." Frustration clouds her vision with tears. "Go away." Her nails become packed with her flesh, clogged with coagulating blood.

A little puppy trots into her room & she stops crying. "Hello puppy doggy." She picks the puppy up, its tail wagging & tongue out, struggling to lick her face. She giggles & hugs the puppy. Everything is alright now.

Or is it?
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Comments: 6

RomaV [2004-02-22 08:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Ok... I see punctuation problems (seeing as how i mess on those myself all the time, I'm an expert on what should and should not be done)... and I think it might be better if it was fleshed out a bit... the disconnectedness takes too little time to make much of an impact. But the impact is there, whoich given the shortness of the piece is something indeed.

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bleedinginbinary In reply to RomaV [2004-02-22 14:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Punctuation problems? Where?

Thanks for the comment. -smiles-

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RomaV In reply to bleedinginbinary [2004-02-24 09:53:06 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. I'll reread it and send you a note. Trade secrets must be kept.

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bleedinginbinary In reply to RomaV [2004-02-26 09:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! -smiles-

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tyrus [2004-02-02 08:19:47 +0000 UTC]

Interesting... is she actually mad or just angsty and stoned? Coz that's the way it's coming across to me. And easily distracted.

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bleedinginbinary In reply to tyrus [2004-02-02 10:01:34 +0000 UTC]

I'd say the latter. -laughs- Never meant for her to be REALLY crazy.

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