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xeeshi [2012-09-21 14:56:39 +0000 UTC]

pyari

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ND-Graphics [2010-01-24 06:33:47 +0000 UTC]

mmmmmmm nice working. i can also draw but dont have much time

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captainrajor [2008-05-06 06:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Arish nice work
u must manage ur WHPTS

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Laraib-110 [2008-02-09 04:20:05 +0000 UTC]

I love the hair! Going to try and make a painting out of this for practice, thanks for letting me! (You're name's pretty btw lol)
Much appreciated! <3

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umer2001 [2007-11-01 05:11:52 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I thought I added u in ma DEV Watch, but u wasnt there, I just added u oh BTW I like the bare back.... nice skecth... I really like it

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rabiya-aysu [2007-09-14 10:30:49 +0000 UTC]

oh my god. an update?! you actually posted something!

i love how you did the spinal cord-- very realistic. your shading is really well done as well. as for the drapes, i think you could have made them a bit thicker and wavier, especially on the left side (it looks kind of stiff). but other than that, it's lovely!

ramadan kareem!

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akinosa [2007-09-11 18:47:05 +0000 UTC]

cool! great job im not gonna critique you cos everyone else has already done it so all im gonna say is well done!

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eklipsed [2007-09-11 15:29:53 +0000 UTC]

hmmm
well well well
advanced critique encouraged ahem ahem

I really like the back, maybe thora sa darker shade skin per dopattay kay pass pass kay aisay lagay kay back per say thora sa utha howa hai :S...realistic ho jaye ga in my opinion.....errmm....spinal cord ko main medically examine nahee karta .....sab fit hai but i dont know.....somethings not right with the head ...proportions.....Bus itni critique kafi hai as mujhay bhee pata hai kay main kitna pani mein hoon

take cares you
ustad doc eklipsed

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Babrus [2007-09-11 07:48:42 +0000 UTC]

ahm
hello stranger

okay i,d like to point out that you should work with proportions
if yer proportions are good in drawings.. u wont need any other thing to make it look good
a rough sketch with rough lines but good proportions is an eye candy

but for now i'd say ... very very nice work like usual
keep drawing werna u'll lose yer touch

( forgod sakes drop a note by mistake i missed you)

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Blazedezignz [2007-09-10 04:39:58 +0000 UTC]

dats gr8 mam very nice art work very very like it.... Mashallah Allah Bless you..

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mr-squirrel [2007-09-09 20:49:06 +0000 UTC]

it's a cool drawing, if you wanna improve draping, i would say, do some exercise with some real clothing rather than a reference picture... maybe you could also use a desk lamp to get the shade you want to work on

hi aisha!! i miss you

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djarshh [2007-09-09 11:23:22 +0000 UTC]

You gave much curve to spinal in upper portion which is OK but not good. And also shade on right hand elbow is not very realistic but on left is good. And Dopatta also has too many curves for no reason what I believe? Rest it’s a good work… I think its enough to break ur heart ahahahahha

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r0shika [2007-09-09 05:22:15 +0000 UTC]

you've done a great job with the drapes actually - it's overall a really well done drawing - great job!
one thing though - what kinda pencils do you use? this could look so awesome with strong charcoal shading..or maybe even less pencil detail and use of inks?
Just a suggestion. But if you feel strongly enough about using pencils then I reckon go for it. Your definately definately on the right track

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lil-desi-chik [2007-09-08 17:46:00 +0000 UTC]

very nice work...makes me wunna get back to art...but wahhdodo college is keeping me busy!! i love da shading nd da hair..da right elbow seems a lil less smudged or blened in?(im not even as good as u ...so i wudnt knw how to explain it dat well..but do u see it?) n im guessig shes holding the cloth behind her? if so, im guessing dere should be more folds or curves dea..to indicate dat she is actually holding it...jus my opinions...i think this work is brilliant.. its only cause uve asked for it dat ive said diss...its jus awesome!! i love ur art
~Sherin

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hasanaliakhtar [2007-09-08 16:57:04 +0000 UTC]

Hi nice to see u here after a long time..Hmm Drapery is one of the most important thing in sketching..u have done a good job..In mu humble opinion u can practice more on blending the highlights and shadows wid their middle tone..Smudging wid paper, tissue or a cotton is not a good thing cuz majority of good artist will not prefer u doing so..In the same way u can work more on her back skin by blending wid ur pressure strokes of a pencil..It can be improved by hell lot of practice cuz am also was very bad in that ..U have done an excellent job wid her hairs..Brilliant execution of line making..Overall really nice work indeed..Wish u all the best in life..Take carez..Cheers

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murtaxa-k [2007-09-08 16:40:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice! You can have some more better results with smudging. I guess you didn't use it on Drapes! Although you did it on the back. I like the spinal cord curve... very nice! Are you an art student?

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