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Published: 2007-05-16 00:46:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 980; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 24
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**** FULL VIEW PLEASEEE !! (thx)*****I started this sketch quite a long time back and haven't had a chance to finish it. I'm SO NOT HAPPY with how it looks, I didn't even wanna POST it..but o well...
I think i probably spent about 3-5 hours on this drawing. You can't see my signature or the ENTIRE drawing cuz it just wouldn't fit on my scanner. Hmm..it wasn't turning out good if I took a picture of it..so had to scan it..
Will try and draw better in future!
Comments and critiques will be greatly appreciated
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That is one ominous drawing for 3-5 hours! I like it just the way it is!!!
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I'm so glad you liked it? I think the shattered effect turned out nice, but the potrait itself needs help.. lol
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Well, I still love it just the way it is.
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Don't be afraid to apply darker pencil strokes. Use a 5B pencil if you have to! But other than that, great work!
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Yes!! I'll definately make a note of that!! 
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My pleasure! And I write my name with a single 'S' (Hasan).
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Hmmm, I like the work on shawl. You're good in kurhaii
Nothing to say more as I'm agree with RayaWolfsun's comments, Alot of work can be done on this piece to make it a master piece.
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hey! long time no see! hope ur'e doing gr8.....no i don't do kurhaii...hehes... yea but i do bridal hennas n stuff....been so busy with studies, pray that i finish my next painting n post it up soon!
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hmmm
guess whose back
back again
eki's back
very nice concept yaar. execution mein thora sa masla ho giya i guess haina. meray khiyal say the longer u take on a piece, i mean breaks mein, phir banda end product say kam satisfy hota hai.
as eastern traditional as always
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Heylo Stranger! Where have u been? U know what.. i think ur'e ABSOLUTLEY RIGHT! I was bored of this drawing..i mean..it was just lying around..n i wanted to start something different... aur abhi bhi aisa he kerrai hoon.. i started this new painting..but i stopped working on it :@... i'll work on it 2nite... i gotta give these things some time.. n how about u?..no artwork lately from ur side either! Must have been pretty busy teaching organic chem to ur shagirds (students)
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Good excelent.. meet me Faysal here. plz view my galery
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thx n welcome to DA !
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welcome dear.. so nice of u...
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first of all i'll go with hidden-paw.. well said bro
the crack is superb.. shading WELL DONE! did u snap it and upload it or did u scan it? coz u r killing the beauty of it by the scan/snap quality u need to adjust a lil of levels after the scanning
there ARE a very few proportional errors but they r not visible in the overall awesomness
i,d say well done as always =]
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Thanko Bob (:
I scanned it 
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heyyy.. been a long time since ive seen ur works. i have to say the details on the clothes are absolutely brilliant. esp the dubatta edge design has a very nicely done 3d effect to it. the shading and details on the face are pretty wicked too, although i do think the eyes need a little bit o retouching. over all u get an A for Awesomeness in detialed jewelry and clothes, and a B for taking a long break from art 
love the whole broken glass theme as well. orginal and nicely done.
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Hey you 
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dudette, jogi's never too bizy to checkout awesome artwork (ofcourse sometimes it takes time to comment n all, but u know what they say, "daer aaya, durust aaya"/ better late than never. ur welcome, n thank u for wishing me goodluck fr studies, cuz i believe ur goodluck wishes worked very well. im a Lawyer/ liar now. graduated 
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o WOW!!! Mashallah thats a GREAT NEWS! probably feels so gud to be outa school ! nain!! Pray for me too friend...can't wait to get into medschool... i'm painting abhi.. i hate.. just HATE painting drapes..
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You said you're looking for critiques... so...
I like the idea of the cracked mirror... but if you look at yourself in a cracked mirror, you'll notice that the reflection is not continuous. In this photo , for instance, notice how the person's reflection is 'split up' by the cracks. (To get that effect, you could always try cutting up the image along the mirror cracks and sticking the pieces on another sheet of paper at slight angles - that would give it even more of a cracked mirror look!)
The other problem is that her face looks flat, but that's simply a matter of shading. She needs more (and darker) shadows to bring out the contours of her face, so she looks more three-dimensional.
All that said, there is a lot about the image that I like. I think you did a marvellous job of rendering the jewellery and the patterns on the dupatta, and I also like the texture of her lips. And the overall concept is pretty cool.
Hope that helps!
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Wow thank u SO much for ur comments n critiques..it was very nice of u to actually take some time out and look for shattered images..i should have done some research on that i guess... thx again!
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No worries... glad I could help you!
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Wesy over all pic is Good but there is squint in her eyes and hairs seems v un natural.
Baqi its beautiful.
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yes there IS something weird bout her eyes!...neways..thanks a lot (:
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proportions r little out but it really is a nice effort...keep it up..
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thanks..lol..ur conserving energy comment iz funny!
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Hahahaha...yeah it is, thats y its there...atleast somehow it brings a little funny smile on face...
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i really like the cracked mirror effect. i've tried to do that before, but it turned out looking just like these random lines on the picture, even if i tried to add depth. >_< haha. anyway, the eyes are really beautiful, and so is the shading. the face looks a little uneven, but the overall picture is amazing. good job!!
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