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Page 18 of Perilous Treasure Chapter 1.Finally, only one more page to go before I begin with Chapter 2!
Well, we have many, many, many badly implemented instances of shading, drawing, and toning. How many can you spot?
Also, this page was a PAIN to tone. Not as much as the CURSED Page, though. That was horrible, due to having to do it TWICE!
Well, we seem to know that the girls have escaped, but does the bad storytelling hint that this monster will be back in a future chapter? Will he be like every other first RPG monster and be stomped horribly everytime hereafter? And doesn't Setsa's method of rescue look like it hurts?
Well, she's still quite inexperienced, after all. Maybe in the future, she'll be able to pull off less painful rescues.
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Ain't that the truth?
Then again, maybe she... er... somewhat deserves it. Karma and all.
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Man, if this is karma at work, I'd hate to see what she did to make the fates mad!
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The fates can exaggerate the extent of what you did.
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Yeah, and their excuses for it suck too.
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Painful dragging is painful, but win comic is win.
Your cool points are Super Saiyan 2.
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Hopefully, I won't be really bulky and slow. I move slow enough as is.
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No, you get cool new levels of speed and can take down freaky green men named Cell.
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It's more painful when you think about Setsa dragging Hana face-down over cold, hard ground, and at the speed she's running? That's three times as painful.
Hana's lucky to be fictional. If this were real, she'd have one hell of a lacerated face.
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Ain't that the truth?
You can already tell Hana's going to be quite ticked.
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Nice running on Setsa, and I'm sure Chapter 2 will be even better than this one has been! XD
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I hope so too, because I hope to have better skills then.
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