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Published: 2008-04-14 23:26:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 883; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 4
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Description Pythagoras, for all his right
  angles and hypotenuse, loved
   the mathematical beauty of music.

Shall we be Pythagorean?

Between our angles and planes,
   our curves and lines, the square root
      of me and the infinity of you,
     
we’ll fall into a rhythmic pattern
  that will harmonize
        the world.
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Comments: 46

ColonelFitz [2008-04-22 05:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Music and math do reside in the same section of the brain...

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Blueskye27 In reply to ColonelFitz [2008-04-22 13:00:52 +0000 UTC]

Really? I did not know that. Thanks.

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ColonelFitz In reply to Blueskye27 [2008-04-23 03:44:31 +0000 UTC]

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AlecBell [2008-04-16 23:47:12 +0000 UTC]

The conceit works well.

I wonder about "the" world. For me worlds are always indefinite. The appropriate indefinite qualifier might be "our"?

(Many worlds, one universe?)

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Blueskye27 In reply to AlecBell [2008-04-17 02:44:43 +0000 UTC]

That might be better; I'll look at it again. Thanks, Alec.

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DavisMarie [2008-04-16 03:39:39 +0000 UTC]

I really like the flow of this poem, especially the last stanza. Brings it all together and ties it up very beautifully.

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Blueskye27 In reply to DavisMarie [2008-04-16 04:16:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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DavisMarie In reply to Blueskye27 [2008-04-16 04:57:43 +0000 UTC]

No problem, dear.

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Tenn-Tenn [2008-04-16 02:11:56 +0000 UTC]

This is rather lovely! It just begs you to read it over and over again and understand it entirely.

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Blueskye27 In reply to Tenn-Tenn [2008-04-16 02:16:56 +0000 UTC]

What a lovely compliment. Thank you so much.

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VVatchword [2008-04-16 01:37:01 +0000 UTC]

That is skill. Beautiful!

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Blueskye27 In reply to VVatchword [2008-04-16 02:22:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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saturninesweetness [2008-04-15 23:55:28 +0000 UTC]

Math equals death.
Music equals life.


Your poem equals love.


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Blueskye27 In reply to saturninesweetness [2008-04-16 00:30:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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Non-Numerus [2008-04-15 23:54:32 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me, or is it quite sinister? Reminds me of a dystopian novel named We, by Yevgeny Zamayatin.

I do wish that the world could harmonize.

I like the poem.

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Blueskye27 In reply to Non-Numerus [2008-04-16 00:31:53 +0000 UTC]

I didn't think of it as sinister, but poems are open to interpretation...

Thanks.

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Non-Numerus In reply to Blueskye27 [2008-04-16 01:01:12 +0000 UTC]

Well, the poem itself isn't really sinister. It's that book, and the mathematically programmed society in which they lived that tilted my mind.

I like this poem.

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Blueskye27 In reply to Non-Numerus [2008-04-16 02:24:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I see. I haven't read that book. Sounds scary...

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CGibbens-Stimson [2008-04-15 22:49:31 +0000 UTC]

DAMN!!!!!

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Blueskye27 In reply to CGibbens-Stimson [2008-04-15 22:51:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Cindy.

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topfiverecordsInc [2008-04-15 20:18:18 +0000 UTC]

oh my god! this is perfect!

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Blueskye27 In reply to topfiverecordsInc [2008-04-15 22:54:52 +0000 UTC]

I like the way it turned out, too. Thanks!

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Arthisa [2008-04-15 12:00:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh I love this poem!! showing the beauty of maths (which, by the way I love), the beauty of music (which I like even more), and linking them to the bigger picture...loved it!

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Blueskye27 In reply to Arthisa [2008-04-15 13:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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redclay1103 [2008-04-15 09:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Hate math. Love this poem.

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Blueskye27 In reply to redclay1103 [2008-04-15 13:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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DarkLiterature [2008-04-15 05:28:55 +0000 UTC]

"Between our angles and planes,
our curves and lines, the square root
of me and the infinity of you..."

can't get any better than that.

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Blueskye27 In reply to DarkLiterature [2008-04-15 05:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot.

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DarkLiterature In reply to Blueskye27 [2008-04-15 20:36:21 +0000 UTC]

no problem. ^^

wrote something similar to this. maybe if I can find it..

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Blueskye27 In reply to DarkLiterature [2008-04-15 22:34:24 +0000 UTC]

Let me know if you find it....

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DarkLiterature In reply to Blueskye27 [2008-04-16 20:07:52 +0000 UTC]

no dice.

eh.. it wasn't that great anyways. your's is much better. heh

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Blueskye27 In reply to DarkLiterature [2008-04-17 03:00:11 +0000 UTC]

You'll have to write a new one then.

Thanks.

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DarkLiterature In reply to Blueskye27 [2008-04-17 20:23:17 +0000 UTC]

but I'm.. not in the mood or frame of mind to do so. maybe one day.. heh

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Blueskye27 In reply to DarkLiterature [2008-04-17 21:17:38 +0000 UTC]

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okiehillgirl [2008-04-15 01:14:46 +0000 UTC]

nice one!

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Blueskye27 In reply to okiehillgirl [2008-04-15 01:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

And thanks for the fav!

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frazzled-mage [2008-04-15 00:49:39 +0000 UTC]

I think there is someone out there that when you meet a harmonic convergence occurs. That a third overtone is generated and the 5ths and 7ths of the chord appear from the aether.

That is my way of saying I enjoyed this poem....

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Blueskye27 In reply to frazzled-mage [2008-04-15 00:52:30 +0000 UTC]

I think you wrote your own there in response.

Glad you liked it. Thanks.

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frazzled-mage In reply to Blueskye27 [2008-04-15 01:06:49 +0000 UTC]

you do a grand job of triggering a poetic response in me..I like these little poetic burst hanging out with you

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Blueskye27 In reply to frazzled-mage [2008-04-15 01:08:20 +0000 UTC]

Glad to be of poetic service, kind sir.

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Pi1grim [2008-04-14 23:56:46 +0000 UTC]

As a musician, I was compelled to read this several times. Excellent writing.

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Blueskye27 In reply to Pi1grim [2008-04-15 00:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Beyond-the-Pages [2008-04-14 23:41:54 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, Cindy.

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Blueskye27 In reply to Beyond-the-Pages [2008-04-15 00:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Izzy.

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Beyond-the-Pages In reply to Blueskye27 [2008-04-15 02:31:38 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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praytell [2008-04-14 23:31:46 +0000 UTC]

'each door opened is a digit,
its value absolute and true
in the mathematical equation
linking infinity and you . . .'

-doors [link]

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