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Published: 2009-01-05 05:51:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1661; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 15
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Description I’ll wear
  nothing
to bed

      (yes,
         nothing)
   
    but my
favorite
     perfume

   a spritz
(here)

    a dab
         (there)

   then I’ll
give you
      all night
   to try

     (please,
             try)

          to
       disrobe
            me
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Comments: 76

PeterTBexley In reply to ??? [2009-01-05 13:31:01 +0000 UTC]

Well thanks - still far too much time taken up with work!
Wouldn't it be nice to read, write, paint a bit, play some piano, eat and make love all day long?

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Blueskye27 In reply to PeterTBexley [2009-01-05 13:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Indeed it would. Work is quite a thorn in my side.

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Darqueness [2009-01-05 11:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Ooo I like this. Very good.

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Blueskye27 In reply to Darqueness [2009-01-05 12:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Crys.

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RYUGEKKO [2009-01-05 08:02:51 +0000 UTC]

aah the late night dreamer
(please,
try)


I like that part rahight there, invitation to an all nighter.
Love the structure, I felt like I needed to put my hand over my eyes like a boy seeing his first *ahem show.I can still see through the spaces between my fingers.

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Blueskye27 In reply to RYUGEKKO [2009-01-05 08:53:55 +0000 UTC]

You, Erik?! Peeping through you fingers over my little poem?! Oh, be serious! hee.

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whoapony [2009-01-05 07:56:02 +0000 UTC]

I think I should go read this outside. I'd melt a lot of ice.

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Blueskye27 In reply to whoapony [2009-01-05 08:53:07 +0000 UTC]

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whoapony In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-01-05 14:21:27 +0000 UTC]

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peterdawes In reply to ??? [2009-01-05 07:37:44 +0000 UTC]

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Blueskye27 In reply to peterdawes [2009-01-05 08:52:58 +0000 UTC]

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creativemikey In reply to ??? [2009-01-05 07:01:13 +0000 UTC]

I can only imagine your feelings

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Blueskye27 In reply to creativemikey [2009-01-05 07:18:36 +0000 UTC]

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jaswannabeme [2009-01-05 06:11:56 +0000 UTC]

... you really can think of all these things, ay, funny one

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Blueskye27 In reply to jaswannabeme [2009-01-05 08:52:49 +0000 UTC]

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Nefex [2009-01-05 06:05:22 +0000 UTC]

haha the last line made me laugh X) It's very cute.

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Blueskye27 In reply to Nefex [2009-01-05 08:52:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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EatingMyOwnFears [2009-01-05 06:04:37 +0000 UTC]

WOOHOO!

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Blueskye27 In reply to EatingMyOwnFears [2009-01-05 08:52:29 +0000 UTC]

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lastinlove In reply to ??? [2009-01-05 06:00:20 +0000 UTC]

Is it warm in here?

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Blueskye27 In reply to lastinlove [2009-01-05 06:24:18 +0000 UTC]

Well, I should hope so.

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lastinlove In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-01-05 13:46:25 +0000 UTC]

*gulp*

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AndromedaII [2009-01-05 05:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Do I ever not love your poems? I don't think so. No other comments.

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Blueskye27 In reply to AndromedaII [2009-01-05 06:24:57 +0000 UTC]

That's so lovely of you, Sirrah. Thanks.

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AndromedaII In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-01-05 06:46:40 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. You know I'm not good with works, but

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