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when you sayyou don’t need
anyone
you’re a liar
(we all need
someone)
what you
really mean
is that you
don’t need
me
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Comments: 78
joufancyhuh [2009-03-04 22:55:15 +0000 UTC]
i hate it when people say things like that. It's like,"just tell me to my face"
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bright-eyes25 [2009-02-04 17:12:35 +0000 UTC]
love your choice of words.
and although i prefer more lengthy pieces, this is great.
nice job.
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pseudometry [2009-01-29 06:32:27 +0000 UTC]
Another great pithy, potent piece.
It seems sad and defiant all at once.
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Blueskye27 In reply to pseudometry [2009-01-29 13:06:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Jamie. I'm glad you think it works.
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1001G [2009-01-29 01:25:59 +0000 UTC]
I think this is how the book was published "hes not that into you"...
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b1gfan [2009-01-28 19:55:30 +0000 UTC]
I think that reflects a lie that too many people tell too often
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Blueskye27 In reply to topfiverecordsInc [2009-01-28 23:42:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Lauren. You know me. I like simple.
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topfiverecordsInc In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-01-29 01:21:29 +0000 UTC]
i think simple is best.
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Spectrumchaser In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-01-29 14:31:23 +0000 UTC]
Ha - don't be sorry! Emotion - emotion - emotion (like location location location) is good.
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jaswannabeme [2009-01-28 13:28:51 +0000 UTC]
definitely we need someone in life,
why not be direct, ay..
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xShadowedDarknessx [2009-01-27 22:35:56 +0000 UTC]
way too often are those words uttered, and too often it is complete bull. everyone needs someone.
anyone who thinks they dont need you blue is obviously missing half their brain (beautifully written)
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Blueskye27 In reply to xShadowedDarknessx [2009-01-29 03:15:13 +0000 UTC]
That's so sweet of you, Heather. Thanks.
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xShadowedDarknessx In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-01-29 03:26:59 +0000 UTC]
anytime my loverly :]
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sanaa-h [2009-01-27 20:44:50 +0000 UTC]
It's scary heart-breaking revelation. but true nevertheless. it's simple and lovely
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ihatenature [2009-01-27 19:46:21 +0000 UTC]
My friends have become big fans of yours, too. All because of wonderful pieces like this.
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Blueskye27 In reply to ihatenature [2009-01-29 03:14:49 +0000 UTC]
It's so kind of you to tell them about me. Thanks, Jennifer.
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marshmallow-pies [2009-01-27 14:50:02 +0000 UTC]
The real message hidden behind the words...
I love how you broke it up at the end - it makes the speaker feel distraught, as if he/she were choking out the words...
As someone who's only ever experience rejection in that area of life, you're onto something. What strikes me time and time again about your work is how I can relate to it on such a deep and primeval level - and how others can as well, reading through comments on your poems.
About your lack of inspiration, I've been surprised at how many incredibly famous poems were written when the poet was going through a tough and dry period. Don't lose heart, you're producing beautiful work.
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Blueskye27 In reply to marshmallow-pies [2009-01-27 18:10:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Katherine. To know that the poems touch you at a deep level means a lot, especially when the words don't seem so good to me lately.
Thank you again.
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VertigoArt [2009-01-27 08:18:23 +0000 UTC]
Your style and flow grow on me the more I read. Another wonderful piece.
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Blueskye27 In reply to VertigoArt [2009-01-27 18:16:03 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you're enjoying them. Thanks.
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Blueskye27 In reply to EatingMyOwnFears [2009-01-29 03:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I'm good. Thanks for asking. Just further and further behind here.
How are you?
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EatingMyOwnFears In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-01-29 03:57:16 +0000 UTC]
I'm in the middle of reading the book called The Present.
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