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Bmaster4114 — Reaching For Distant Friends

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Published: 2018-11-22 01:10:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1169; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 0
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Description It.... is done..... This.... this took me a bit..... for reference I made the file on Saturday, ‎November ‎17, ‎2018, ‏‎3:32:50 PM EST  and finished it ‎Today, ‎November ‎21, ‎2018, ‏‎13 minutes ago take out time I was at work and at class or just working on other stuff I'd say this image took the most time out of others.... And one of the first image I wanted to make (not counting coms or requests) that doesn't have my Oc's in it



SO what i was going for was them reaching for a center point. their arms not fully outstretched to keep them from looking desperate, but still show the attempt and yearning to reach those far away. Wanted to use the color of each character for the Background an earth orange similar of the keyblade graveyard. A lush green Forrest for Ven..... that isn't actually really based on a world in birth by sleep..... maybe the Enchanted Dominion. Aqua got the sky because..... its blue >.> and the sky rains..... shhhhh

Wanted to give Ven the vacant stare as Aqua seemed more depressed and worried, Terra is more determined and ready to fight to reach his friends.


I will fully admit the kingdom hearts story is not the best and is very convoluted..... but birth by sleep I feel bad for these 3 as they are forced into something so much bigger than they even know being lied to and tricked.


Anywho THANK YOU for clicking and have a good day!
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Comments: 3

PeachyProtist [2018-12-01 08:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


The composition is cool!
Some things to work on would be:
Balance of the pic: Now is not so balanced because their bodies are cropped out at different parts. If they were each cropped more or less at the same area of their body, could be better.

Their poses: You can try varying the angles, one in side view, the other in 3/4 or sth like that, it could be more dynamic. And maybe extend their arm a tiny bit more and not too close to the body so that it looks more natural.

For contrast of the pic, you can keep some areas saturated and some a bit more faded in colour to avoid it looking bland.

The overall drawing is pretty good!

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Bmaster4114 In reply to PeachyProtist [2018-12-01 18:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I will keep this in mind

will be half honest went the cropped route for 2 reasons one wanted it to be the aspect ratio of an 8 by 11 and i wanted them each 120 degrees from each other .

the second reason is less details needed for drawn for pants

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PeachyProtist In reply to Bmaster4114 [2018-12-02 08:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Ahh I understand!!


You're welcome.

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