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Published: 2009-12-30 14:51:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 576; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 23
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Just another attempt at refining this thing, but it isn't coming along very well x_x oh well.Related content
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While it appears messy up-close, I have to say that from a smaller or "farther away" view it really looks great. Which is definitely a good thing, as it means your overall composition and color choices are strong. With refinement this could end up pretty darn awesome.
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Aye, I'm still working out the coloring style and all that. Penwork and brushwork is hard to mix at times.
I'm hoping so XD
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P.s. City Runner is a truly amazing piece.
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful words.
I appreciate your suggestions -- I will apply them toward the next one. The thing about this is, I'm trying a new style of development -- drawing it over and over in different ways to eventually create one piece that I'm truly happy with. My problem isn't so much with technical skill (not because I feel it is good), but with the design of the island. I can never seem to find the right balance to it, but I don't want to copy the ideas of others, so I'm drastically refusing to see any references.
Also, thank you XD I love that piece with all my heart. Not my best, but I love it XD
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You're welcome! Thank you for displaying your wonderful talents and best of luck! ^^
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i'm having trouble with the same concept : /
look at the attempt in my gallery if it helps at all though
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I checked it out and it is interesting -- I like your take on it, but I'm trying to make this my own island through a series of refinement sketches, like this one.
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my main dilema is making it 3 dimensional without making it look like a treasure map glued to a rock : /
you do a good job of creating realistic depth, or at least good enough for a concept
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I know the problem x_x just takes a lot of studying.
Thanks XD I think so
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I love your scenery! It kind of reminds me of the Halleluja Mountains of Pandora from Avatar.
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They were a bit of inspiration, but more was drawn from other sources.
Thanks :3
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Wow.. I really like those clouds.
I stared at them for a while. xD;
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XD thanks. I was pretty stoked when they didn't look terrible
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Nonsense. This is great. The texture is most excellent in this. Water sort of looks papery, but other than that, this is a splendid piece.
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Aye, keep it up. I can see some improvement here, for sure.
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