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I am literally obsessed over him. When I saw this dog on ~Dazoi 's adopts, I couldn't resist. Just couldn't. So I patiently waited for her and now I finally have a chance to get him

OK, so since I couldn't draw a fullbody simple picture to save my life, I did something like this instead. Hope it's ok, thought C:

Here is some info c:

Name: Bak (means "servant" in Ancient Egyptian)
Gender: Male
Age: 2.4-4 years (basically, same age as Tabouta)

Backstory: Bak was a pet dog of an archeologist family. Originaly, he was bought and lived in England with this family, until one they these archeologists were invited on a dig-down in Egypt desert. The couple and their young son took the dog with them since no one was ready to take care of him for a very long time.
As soon as they got to Egypt, Bak felt very pleasant and loved the place. He loved to play, rush and dig in the sand, even more with his master, the little boy.
Everything was fine for about 2 months. Digging went great, Bak's masters found a lot of valuable pottery and cloth. When it was evening, Bak started to feel very curious for what is deep down in the dig-down. He silently jumped inside and started to explore. He went throught the dungeons, ran into holes and played with rocks. But, sooner or later, he got bored, so decided to walk back up and sleep with his masters. But, as soon as he got up he realized that there were no tents. No humans. No cars. No nothing. Bak was shocked and scared. He thought that they left without him, got tired or something. Bak was in deep trouble. He had no idea how to survive in a desert, so, he started to wander it around hoping to starve to death.
But the things ment to be different. He found a small oasis, basically, a pond and few trees and grass arounds. There were few lizards whom he could catch and eat. But also here, things ment to be different.
As he was resting after a good meal, suddenly a band of dogs showed up. Bak hid behind the biggest tree and listened. The big, grey tail-less dog was their leader, no doubt. He ordered the rest dogs to get him food while he himself was just sitting.
Bak realized that the band will not go anywhere for a while and started to slowly back off, hoping he will be able to silently escape. But one of tail-less dog's troops had a quicker eye. He spotted Bak and was yelling something about "ŗuin dog spy" and big grey tail-less dog ordered to kill him with no hesitation.
Bak was quick and managed to avoid most of the attacks, getting only 2 small scars from them. That made the tail-less dog very mad and he invaded the fight himself, hitting Bak's muzzle with his paw, giving him his big scar. Bak felt unconsious and the dogs thought he's dead, so just threw him away.
Bak was lying like it for a while until a dog named Satsutora spotted him. He took him to his base and woke him up with a splash of water.
At first Bak several times tried to escape, but after failing all the times and dogs around him laughing friendly, he realized that these dogs aren't a harm for him.
He was taken by one of the females and she introduced him to this world and what's going on. Even more, bak slowly became best friends with Tabouta.

I will end at this point since the thing is friggin long enough allready and I don't want to spoil everything out. Also, no, the archeologist family didn't abandon him. Acctually he just came out from the other side of the dig dwon where were no cars/tents etc. So it all was a big misunderstanding XD

Also, the only things I tweaked in his design were the small scars. I just couldn't come up with how he gets a moon-shaped scar on his chest, so I made it a regular, long scar.

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Enough about the character, more to a nother thing.

It seems like people give critiques only when my critique widget is open. So, fine, I will open it this time too.

I am learning the placement of shadows/lights and all. I still have big problems with it, so, if you want to help, here is a cell shaded picture with no lights

[link]

Tweak it as much as you want

Excuse me for typos, I will try to fix them all if there are any.

Hope I get him!

Design (c) ~Dazoi
Ginga (c) Y. Takahashi

Description
I am literally obsessed over him. When I saw this dog on ~Dazoi 's adopts, I couldn't resist. Just couldn't. So I patiently waited for her and now I finally have a chance to get him

OK, so since I couldn't draw a fullbody simple picture to save my life, I did something like this instead. Hope it's ok, thought C:

Here is some info c:

Name: Bak (means "servant" in Ancient Egyptian)
Gender: Male
Age: 2.4-4 years (basically, same age as Tabouta)

Backstory: Bak was a pet dog of an archeologist family. Originaly, he was bought and lived in England with this family, until one they these archeologists were invited on a dig-down in Egypt desert. The couple and their young son took the dog with them since no one was ready to take care of him for a very long time.
As soon as they got to Egypt, Bak felt very pleasant and loved the place. He loved to play, rush and dig in the sand, even more with his master, the little boy.
Everything was fine for about 2 months. Digging went great, Bak's masters found a lot of valuable pottery and cloth. When it was evening, Bak started to feel very curious for what is deep down in the dig-down. He silently jumped inside and started to explore. He went throught the dungeons, ran into holes and played with rocks. But, sooner or later, he got bored, so decided to walk back up and sleep with his masters. But, as soon as he got up he realized that there were no tents. No humans. No cars. No nothing. Bak was shocked and scared. He thought that they left without him, got tired or something. Bak was in deep trouble. He had no idea how to survive in a desert, so, he started to wander it around hoping to starve to death.
But the things ment to be different. He found a small oasis, basically, a pond and few trees and grass arounds. There were few lizards whom he could catch and eat. But also here, things ment to be different.
As he was resting after a good meal, suddenly a band of dogs showed up. Bak hid behind the biggest tree and listened. The big, grey tail-less dog was their leader, no doubt. He ordered the rest dogs to get him food while he himself was just sitting.
Bak realized that the band will not go anywhere for a while and started to slowly back off, hoping he will be able to silently escape. But one of tail-less dog's troops had a quicker eye. He spotted Bak and was yelling something about "ŗuin dog spy" and big grey tail-less dog ordered to kill him with no hesitation.
Bak was quick and managed to avoid most of the attacks, getting only 2 small scars from them. That made the tail-less dog very mad and he invaded the fight himself, hitting Bak's muzzle with his paw, giving him his big scar. Bak felt unconsious and the dogs thought he's dead, so just threw him away.
Bak was lying like it for a while until a dog named Satsutora spotted him. He took him to his base and woke him up with a splash of water.
At first Bak several times tried to escape, but after failing all the times and dogs around him laughing friendly, he realized that these dogs aren't a harm for him.
He was taken by one of the females and she introduced him to this world and what's going on. Even more, bak slowly became best friends with Tabouta.

I will end at this point since the thing is friggin long enough allready and I don't want to spoil everything out. Also, no, the archeologist family didn't abandon him. Acctually he just came out from the other side of the dig dwon where were no cars/tents etc. So it all was a big misunderstanding XD

Also, the only things I tweaked in his design were the small scars. I just couldn't come up with how he gets a moon-shaped scar on his chest, so I made it a regular, long scar.

-------------------
Enough about the character, more to a nother thing.

It seems like people give critiques only when my critique widget is open. So, fine, I will open it this time too.

I am learning the placement of shadows/lights and all. I still have big problems with it, so, if you want to help, here is a cell shaded picture with no lights

[link]

Tweak it as much as you want

Excuse me for typos, I will try to fix them all if there are any.

Hope I get him!

Design (c) ~Dazoi
Ginga (c) Y. Takahashi