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So kilroy is a character in my story that doesn't last long and I didn't want him to go to waste, so I thought to put him in a role playing group I'm not big on role playing, but I can give it a try. Group created by and Templet created by
So I'm developing a new style, and I didn't like the last one so I re-did it. The burns look 100x better and I added in his injury so yeah
Now the boring long part...

Name: Leroy Avery
Title: Kilroy (prefers to go by)
Reason banished there:stole most of his life and killed many innocent people/police and his boss---> fav.me/dazqxy2 )
Age when death occurred: 24
DoB: July 17, 1911
DoD: March 26, 1936
Place of death: in an alleyway on the North side in Chicago, Illinois
Died due to: internal bleeding to the brain by other gang members beating him to death with crowbars.
Weapon(s): colt police positive .38 S&W, brass knuckles and Tommy gun
Clothing/equipment: pin striped suit (optional), black slacks, dress shoes with spats and underneath a home made bullet proof vest.
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 172 lbs
Build: Broad shoulders and some what slim torso.

Bio: fav.me/dbabod8 <-- full detailed version (I suggest you read this one instead)
Summarized version
Leroy grew up in Texas with a wealthy family and two other siblings. Him and his older brother Mickey started to steal at a young age. As they got older they started to rob banks. Eventually their younger sister told on them to their parents. Their dad was going to take them down to the police station, but they escaped by rolling out of the car and hiding in the woods. They stayed in a small town and read about the gangs up in Chicago. They were off to Chicago, when they got there they were dazed by the lights. The next morning Leroy went to a diner for breakfast and overheard two guys talking about a Speakeasy (nightclub sells illegal liquor). Leroy went back to the hotel to tell Mickey all about it. Mickey said he would check it out, but he didn't want Leroy to come along because he was afraid he would get hurt or they would be found out. Mickey came home drunk that night and would continue this same thing every night. Leroy was furious with him, joining a gang without him and coming home drunk. Mickey never let Leroy go outside or find a job in fear of him being caught. Of course Leroy went behind his back and took boxing lessons. He got bruises on his knuckles and a nice cut from his nose to cheek. He competed in a competition making it to the semifinals, but ending up getting knocked out, a broken jaw and dislocated shoulder. Mickey found out about this and made him quit boxing. The two got in a fight and Leroy left Mickey to never see him again.

Leroy finds himself on the other side of Chicago in a run down hotel. He wakes up to a crime scene out his hotel room window. Heads down to check it out. He joins into the crowd of people and then is shoved by two well dressed men. Leroy followed them to a funeral home. He walked into an old lady sitting at a desk. He asks about two guys and she took him to a wall, pulled a candlestick and a door opened right up, told him to ask for a Lucky. He went down a set of stairs to another room full of men dressed their Sunday best, smoking up a sea. He asks for Lucky and a kid his age raises his hand, introduces himself as Sharkie then showed him to Lucky’s office.Leroy walks into the office and asks about a job. He was able to join the gang and his first job until he was 20 was burying bodies. He got a shovel and walked out of the office. Another kid around his age was waiting out by the door then slapped Leroy on the back. Leroy gave him a dirty look, the kid then introduced himself as Ace, Leroy didn't like him one bit. Eventually Sharkie came back and showed Leroy where the bodies were supposed to be buried.They walk to the back of the funeral home to an open field with bumps here and there. At this point Leroy had no idea what he was getting himself into.

2 years pass, Leroy was making fine money with his graveyard job, but today was the day he gets promoted. With the money he has been making he was able to find an apartment, new clothes and a nice car. He went to the funeral home went down the secret stairs to find the room dark, he turns on the light and everyone surprised him. Lucky came and congratulated him that he finally was moving up from his hard work. He brought Leroy to his office and told him his new job was with Sharkie and Ace, Leroy was smiling and then he lost it once he heard Ace’s name. Leroy met up with Sharkie and Ace at the front of the home. The three of them hopped into the car and drove to their first speakeasy for the day. They made their rounds and made it to the last one for the day. Sharkie and Leroy walked in as Ace stood outside. The bartender tells the two how they got raided by the police last night and drained all the alcohol. Sharkie and the bartender went into the back to check out the mess. Leroy sat at the bar waiting, he could hear a loud screeching coming from outside, then Ace yells to duck. Before Leroy could do anything a grenade is thrown into the bar and explodes. Leroy tried to get behind the bar, but his left side of his face was burnt right off. Leroy passed out and didn’t remember a thing. He wakes up in the hospital with Sharkie and Ace by his side. He asks what happened and they tell him he was caught up in an explosion, the North side gang blew up the speakeasy. And that Lucky was murdered. Leroy was enraged, these guys that did that to him could have also killed Lucky. He swear his revenge on Lucky and that he will kill every man in his way to find the culprits.

3 years past, with in those three years Sharkie became the new boss and now goes by Tony, Ace and Leroy didn't get along still. Leroy picked up a new nickname, the past 3 years Leroy killed over 50 men trying to find the guys that ruined his face, with his violence he also killed and injured police and pedestrians, he gained the nickname Kilroy. Kilroy changed over the years many of his friends and Tony would say he has gone psychotic, maybe has PTSD. Things just went down from there, Kilroy met his brother again after 5 years of no communication. They both caught a glimpse of each other walking in the streets, Mickey maybe didn't recognize him, but Kilroy did. Kilroy asked Ace if he knew about the gang leader on the North side, He told him that it was Mickey and 5 years ago Mickey killed his boss to gain his power and that Mickey was the one who called the orders of the bombing and murder of Lucky. Kilroy set up a meeting with Mickey and they talked. Mickey changed a lot he got more manipulative and calm, and Kilroy became the crazy one. Mickey made a deal with Kilroy, that if he kills Tony and becomes the new boss they could become the rulers of Chicago and maybe all of America. Kilroy liked the idea and he went with it. Kilroy waited for Ace to head out of town and then he would murder Tony. Ace finally leaves town for the week, and late at night tony was at the office doing bills, Kilroy came in with a gun behind his back. They chatted for a few minutes and before Tony could say anything more Kilroy shot him in the chest three times and once in the head. He dragged the body to the back of the funeral home and buried Tony.

Year past the bootlegging business starts to go down, people aren't making as much money as they use to. Kilroy isn’t happy with this the 50/50 split deal between Kilroy and Mickey wasn’t going to plan, Mickey was getting more money out of it. Kilroy Heads to the north side to talk with Mickey. He walks in and talks for a moment of how things been and he breaks the news that he wants to cut the deal off. Mickey stared at him, a cold stare. He tells him it's fine and sends Kilroy on his way. Mickey then tells his twin goons to kill Kilroy he was in no need for him. Kilroy was walking home to his apartment taking the alleyways avoiding cops. As he turns the corner he feels a hard sting on the back of his head. He drops to the ground everything started to tilt and spin. All he could see were two of the same guy, the twins. They beat him on the head with crowbars and kicking him in the stomach and chest. His face was swollen barely breathing then everything went black. People surrounded him, he was taken to the hospital, but they couldn't save him. He died March 26, 1936 of internal bleeding in the brain

Skills/Extra Features: He's decent with a gun knows how to use one, but prefers boxing/close combat. Blacks out when in a fist fight, he never remembers what happened in the fight, but who ever crosses paths with his fists may end up in the hospital or 6 feet under. The only time he uses a gun is when in a gun fight, in danger, or someone is running away.

Personality/Mannerisms: he's strong-minded and a serious person, doesn't like to joke around you pull a prank on him, get ready to lose a finger or 2. He also likes to lead conversations never try to 1-up him. More introvert, but if intoxicated he can be a really social guy, more laid back when drunk. He is constantly fidgety, hates sitting always looking for something to do (played a big part in stealing and constantly getting in fights). And he doesn't like change it gives him a sense of vulnerability

If you'd like you can critique my character
There's always room for improvement

Description
So kilroy is a character in my story that doesn't last long and I didn't want him to go to waste, so I thought to put him in a role playing group I'm not big on role playing, but I can give it a try. Group created by and Templet created by
So I'm developing a new style, and I didn't like the last one so I re-did it. The burns look 100x better and I added in his injury so yeah
Now the boring long part...

Name: Leroy Avery
Title: Kilroy (prefers to go by)
Reason banished there:stole most of his life and killed many innocent people/police and his boss---> fav.me/dazqxy2 )
Age when death occurred: 24
DoB: July 17, 1911
DoD: March 26, 1936
Place of death: in an alleyway on the North side in Chicago, Illinois
Died due to: internal bleeding to the brain by other gang members beating him to death with crowbars.
Weapon(s): colt police positive .38 S&W, brass knuckles and Tommy gun
Clothing/equipment: pin striped suit (optional), black slacks, dress shoes with spats and underneath a home made bullet proof vest.
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 172 lbs
Build: Broad shoulders and some what slim torso.

Bio: fav.me/dbabod8 <-- full detailed version (I suggest you read this one instead)
Summarized version
Leroy grew up in Texas with a wealthy family and two other siblings. Him and his older brother Mickey started to steal at a young age. As they got older they started to rob banks. Eventually their younger sister told on them to their parents. Their dad was going to take them down to the police station, but they escaped by rolling out of the car and hiding in the woods. They stayed in a small town and read about the gangs up in Chicago. They were off to Chicago, when they got there they were dazed by the lights. The next morning Leroy went to a diner for breakfast and overheard two guys talking about a Speakeasy (nightclub sells illegal liquor). Leroy went back to the hotel to tell Mickey all about it. Mickey said he would check it out, but he didn't want Leroy to come along because he was afraid he would get hurt or they would be found out. Mickey came home drunk that night and would continue this same thing every night. Leroy was furious with him, joining a gang without him and coming home drunk. Mickey never let Leroy go outside or find a job in fear of him being caught. Of course Leroy went behind his back and took boxing lessons. He got bruises on his knuckles and a nice cut from his nose to cheek. He competed in a competition making it to the semifinals, but ending up getting knocked out, a broken jaw and dislocated shoulder. Mickey found out about this and made him quit boxing. The two got in a fight and Leroy left Mickey to never see him again.

Leroy finds himself on the other side of Chicago in a run down hotel. He wakes up to a crime scene out his hotel room window. Heads down to check it out. He joins into the crowd of people and then is shoved by two well dressed men. Leroy followed them to a funeral home. He walked into an old lady sitting at a desk. He asks about two guys and she took him to a wall, pulled a candlestick and a door opened right up, told him to ask for a Lucky. He went down a set of stairs to another room full of men dressed their Sunday best, smoking up a sea. He asks for Lucky and a kid his age raises his hand, introduces himself as Sharkie then showed him to Lucky’s office.Leroy walks into the office and asks about a job. He was able to join the gang and his first job until he was 20 was burying bodies. He got a shovel and walked out of the office. Another kid around his age was waiting out by the door then slapped Leroy on the back. Leroy gave him a dirty look, the kid then introduced himself as Ace, Leroy didn't like him one bit. Eventually Sharkie came back and showed Leroy where the bodies were supposed to be buried.They walk to the back of the funeral home to an open field with bumps here and there. At this point Leroy had no idea what he was getting himself into.

2 years pass, Leroy was making fine money with his graveyard job, but today was the day he gets promoted. With the money he has been making he was able to find an apartment, new clothes and a nice car. He went to the funeral home went down the secret stairs to find the room dark, he turns on the light and everyone surprised him. Lucky came and congratulated him that he finally was moving up from his hard work. He brought Leroy to his office and told him his new job was with Sharkie and Ace, Leroy was smiling and then he lost it once he heard Ace’s name. Leroy met up with Sharkie and Ace at the front of the home. The three of them hopped into the car and drove to their first speakeasy for the day. They made their rounds and made it to the last one for the day. Sharkie and Leroy walked in as Ace stood outside. The bartender tells the two how they got raided by the police last night and drained all the alcohol. Sharkie and the bartender went into the back to check out the mess. Leroy sat at the bar waiting, he could hear a loud screeching coming from outside, then Ace yells to duck. Before Leroy could do anything a grenade is thrown into the bar and explodes. Leroy tried to get behind the bar, but his left side of his face was burnt right off. Leroy passed out and didn’t remember a thing. He wakes up in the hospital with Sharkie and Ace by his side. He asks what happened and they tell him he was caught up in an explosion, the North side gang blew up the speakeasy. And that Lucky was murdered. Leroy was enraged, these guys that did that to him could have also killed Lucky. He swear his revenge on Lucky and that he will kill every man in his way to find the culprits.

3 years past, with in those three years Sharkie became the new boss and now goes by Tony, Ace and Leroy didn't get along still. Leroy picked up a new nickname, the past 3 years Leroy killed over 50 men trying to find the guys that ruined his face, with his violence he also killed and injured police and pedestrians, he gained the nickname Kilroy. Kilroy changed over the years many of his friends and Tony would say he has gone psychotic, maybe has PTSD. Things just went down from there, Kilroy met his brother again after 5 years of no communication. They both caught a glimpse of each other walking in the streets, Mickey maybe didn't recognize him, but Kilroy did. Kilroy asked Ace if he knew about the gang leader on the North side, He told him that it was Mickey and 5 years ago Mickey killed his boss to gain his power and that Mickey was the one who called the orders of the bombing and murder of Lucky. Kilroy set up a meeting with Mickey and they talked. Mickey changed a lot he got more manipulative and calm, and Kilroy became the crazy one. Mickey made a deal with Kilroy, that if he kills Tony and becomes the new boss they could become the rulers of Chicago and maybe all of America. Kilroy liked the idea and he went with it. Kilroy waited for Ace to head out of town and then he would murder Tony. Ace finally leaves town for the week, and late at night tony was at the office doing bills, Kilroy came in with a gun behind his back. They chatted for a few minutes and before Tony could say anything more Kilroy shot him in the chest three times and once in the head. He dragged the body to the back of the funeral home and buried Tony.

Year past the bootlegging business starts to go down, people aren't making as much money as they use to. Kilroy isn’t happy with this the 50/50 split deal between Kilroy and Mickey wasn’t going to plan, Mickey was getting more money out of it. Kilroy Heads to the north side to talk with Mickey. He walks in and talks for a moment of how things been and he breaks the news that he wants to cut the deal off. Mickey stared at him, a cold stare. He tells him it's fine and sends Kilroy on his way. Mickey then tells his twin goons to kill Kilroy he was in no need for him. Kilroy was walking home to his apartment taking the alleyways avoiding cops. As he turns the corner he feels a hard sting on the back of his head. He drops to the ground everything started to tilt and spin. All he could see were two of the same guy, the twins. They beat him on the head with crowbars and kicking him in the stomach and chest. His face was swollen barely breathing then everything went black. People surrounded him, he was taken to the hospital, but they couldn't save him. He died March 26, 1936 of internal bleeding in the brain

Skills/Extra Features: He's decent with a gun knows how to use one, but prefers boxing/close combat. Blacks out when in a fist fight, he never remembers what happened in the fight, but who ever crosses paths with his fists may end up in the hospital or 6 feet under. The only time he uses a gun is when in a gun fight, in danger, or someone is running away.

Personality/Mannerisms: he's strong-minded and a serious person, doesn't like to joke around you pull a prank on him, get ready to lose a finger or 2. He also likes to lead conversations never try to 1-up him. More introvert, but if intoxicated he can be a really social guy, more laid back when drunk. He is constantly fidgety, hates sitting always looking for something to do (played a big part in stealing and constantly getting in fights). And he doesn't like change it gives him a sense of vulnerability

If you'd like you can critique my character
There's always room for improvement