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Published: 2002-07-16 00:30:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 598; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 42
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you push me down roughlyonto the bed
i struggle to get up
but you hold me down
tie me down
i try to scream
but you muffle my mouth with yours
you tear my clothes
rip them to shreds
now i lay naked before you
scared and worried
but exited and anticipating.
you run your hands roughly over me
exploring my body
you press yourself inside of me
i am comsumed by unspeakable pain
and pleasure all at the same time
you pump harder and harder
holding tight
using me harshly
no thought of how it hurts
but god it feels good
i feel you quiver within me.
you rap your hands around my throat
and pump harder
the blood starts to flow from within me
and still you continue.
i feel you realize inside, and it is all over
slowly you withdraw yourself, and whisper in my ear
"i love you"
my fantasy has been fufilled
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Comments: 5
Passionate-Kiss [2004-03-07 03:17:33 +0000 UTC]
it was good... kinda eerie but good i like it!
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emoboi [2002-07-21 03:51:19 +0000 UTC]
*utterly speachless*
thats well written.. but i have to agree with -mouse on that one.. sheesh..
in my opinion i dont think rape would be that great for me.. (but thats a whole different story )
keep it up
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ladyosl [2002-07-18 08:06:53 +0000 UTC]
my goodness!! now that's a different side of you for sure!! I like it!!
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anon-y-mouse [2002-07-17 11:18:08 +0000 UTC]
interesting to say the least
i think i would go through and clean it up a bit, in some places the words stick you down a bit, and in others there are a few spelling errors (such as "rap your hands" instead of "wrap your hands")
it is interesting to read though, i was going to poke at you for saying "excited" about rape, cause rarely does the victim feel excitement, but then i got to the end and understood
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