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Published: 2010-03-11 20:44:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 165; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description Blurred Lines

We started as acquaintances
But our friendship grew quickly.
It didn't take long for me to learn
How kind and caring you are.
With a new year came a deeper connection.
You see how much fun I have with you,
But what I don't show
Is how the line between friends
And something more
Has become so blurred in my mind.
So now all that's left is my heart
Wondering if I'll ever jump that line
And if you'll come with me.
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Comments: 34

darkelvenfaerie [2010-03-19 04:42:27 +0000 UTC]

I really like your poem.
There are not many friendships like this.
Hold it dear.

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Booknerd135 In reply to darkelvenfaerie [2010-03-19 10:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your short but sweet advice and comments.

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gukla [2010-03-16 13:25:46 +0000 UTC]

Well, how can I start ...

I it.
For the semplicity of its words, their intensity, for all the feelings and the emotions that you can feel as your owns, as you read. As this friendship becomes something more complex and confusing in this little piece.

Compliments for the image you give about the line that separates friendship and love, that is so thin and, as you wrote, so blurred.

I totally love the last three lines I see both hope and discouragement in these words, expectations and doubts.

For what it will happen if you face the jump alone. Or together.
Intense and charming

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Booknerd135 In reply to gukla [2010-03-16 20:11:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much! I love how you really analyze my work, your comments are the best and most helpful.

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gukla In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-17 13:09:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh, you're very welcome! I'm glad my analyzes/comments are of any helps for you, I've tried my best giving you decent commentS, because your works deserve the best, seriously

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Moonless-Love [2010-03-12 20:47:51 +0000 UTC]

WHEN!!!! WHEN WHEN WHEN WHEN WHEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u said ur gonna tell me. so WHEN DANG IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~

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Booknerd135 In reply to Moonless-Love [2010-03-13 01:32:38 +0000 UTC]

I said i'd tell you at school, but the you didn't ask, so I didn't tell. it will be at school if you remind me at an appropriate time.

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Moonless-Love In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-13 03:21:44 +0000 UTC]

sunday. tell me sunday.

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Booknerd135 In reply to Moonless-Love [2010-03-13 03:51:20 +0000 UTC]

no. I told you, school

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Moonless-Love In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-13 04:53:38 +0000 UTC]

meh.

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FantasyObsessed27 [2010-03-12 02:02:49 +0000 UTC]

who's?!

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Booknerd135 In reply to FantasyObsessed27 [2010-03-12 02:03:14 +0000 UTC]

who's what?

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FantasyObsessed27 In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-12 02:08:15 +0000 UTC]

emily said she knows who you were talking about, of course, if you don't want to tell, i completely understand!

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Booknerd135 In reply to FantasyObsessed27 [2010-03-12 02:10:24 +0000 UTC]

I almost gaurentee (oh whatever, i can't spell it) you Emilie's wrong. I would love to tell someone, but I just...can't. it's not at all that i don't trust you, I just can't tell anybody.

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FantasyObsessed27 In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-12 02:11:39 +0000 UTC]

this is the way i felt when i first started liking....him....i didn't tell anyone for three months!

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Booknerd135 In reply to FantasyObsessed27 [2010-03-12 02:12:11 +0000 UTC]

really? wow

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FantasyObsessed27 In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-12 02:15:51 +0000 UTC]

ya, i was tortured into telling the first person, of course she was making fun of him not a moment before, i got all red and she asked why, all went down hill from there....OMW DOWN HILL FAIL! haha

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Booknerd135 In reply to FantasyObsessed27 [2010-03-12 02:16:49 +0000 UTC]

lol, but seriously, I'm sorry.

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FantasyObsessed27 In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-12 02:20:40 +0000 UTC]

its fine, it was getting to the point were i had to tell someone...

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emilyride [2010-03-11 23:27:42 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW WHO IT IS!!! and today he said that you were his therapist or something like that. he appriciates your motherly wisdom!

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Booknerd135 In reply to emilyride [2010-03-12 00:53:41 +0000 UTC]

Also, I want you to actaually tell me what you think of the poem.

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emilyride In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-12 02:26:16 +0000 UTC]

i love it of course!

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Booknerd135 In reply to emilyride [2010-03-12 11:38:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks! This one really isn't my favorite, I've done better, so I wanted more opinions on this one.

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Booknerd135 In reply to emilyride [2010-03-12 00:39:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh really? Who said this to you? He's never said something like that to my face, but i'm flattered, so I want to know who said that and who you think my mushy poems are about!

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emilyride In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-12 02:25:10 +0000 UTC]

HE said that to me, because he asked me if i ever considered consuling and i told him that you were my therapist once and he was like LAURIES MY THERAPIST. im to lazy to note you so i will just say the one who's jacket i took home with me one time, and who's jacket made me very popular at drama haha.

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Booknerd135 In reply to emilyride [2010-03-12 11:41:12 +0000 UTC]

Really? That amazes me. I know I was in sixth grade, but i thought it ended there. Hmmm. This gives me a lot of things to think about, but your wrong, my poems, except the first one that you know all about, aren't about him. Sorry.

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emilyride In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-12 21:14:29 +0000 UTC]

seriously. well i was wrong. waaay wrong

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Booknerd135 In reply to emilyride [2010-03-13 01:34:09 +0000 UTC]

yes. But what do you mean "waaay wrong"? Why the extra "a"s? You know something else?

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emilyride In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-13 18:12:56 +0000 UTC]

no. thats juuust how i typeeee!!

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Booknerd135 In reply to emilyride [2010-03-13 18:40:56 +0000 UTC]

oh, OK

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titansgeek13 [2010-03-11 21:33:13 +0000 UTC]

nice

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Booknerd135 In reply to titansgeek13 [2010-03-11 21:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm surprised you read this without me telling you to. (I don't mean offense by that, you just said that you don't usually pay a whole lot of attention to your deviantwatch things so I assumed you wouldn't read it.)

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titansgeek13 In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-11 21:36:08 +0000 UTC]

chaa, well after that i realized that you want me to, so i will

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Booknerd135 In reply to titansgeek13 [2010-03-11 21:36:30 +0000 UTC]

awww, thanks.

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