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Published: 2010-03-02 00:12:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 357; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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I know I act differently around you.I know you act differently around me.
I know at least part of me thinks you're amazing.
I know in sixth grade, you told me your darkest secrets,
I know I did all I could to help you.
I know one of my friends said you told them something different from what you told me,
I know you didn't tell me.
I know at least one of my friends really likes you,
I don't think you'll ever like me.
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I do not write the best of stories, but with poems like these...
I see a story behind it.
I know it sounds weird.
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No, that makes sense. There is a story behind it, but i'm not sure I can share it. Besides, I'm not sure about my abilityto write a good short story. Thank you though. I will think about it.
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NOW TELL ME WHO ITS ABOUT~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~. NOW. NOW. TELL. ME. >
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*sniffle* why? *cries*
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it's not because I don't trust you, it's just that nobody really needs to know except me and the person it's about.
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WAH~! *cries for forever**
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It really isn't anything against you! I swear!
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TELL ME!!!!!!!!! *WAHHHHHH~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~* or ill never have another cult meeting again. hmpf. thats how badly i want to know. hmpf.
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That would make me very sad. And you can't do that to Bree and Cristina! I'm sorry you want to know so badly because I'm not telling. Let me repeat: it's NOTHING against you, but nobody needs to know. I didn't put anyone's name in because nobody else needs to know these things about this person.
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I CAN KEEP A SECRET!!!!!!!!!! and fine. ill invite everyone to the cult meetings but you. hmpf.
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I changed my mind, I will explain at school. I need to do it in person.
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THANK YOU!!!! *huggles*
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Really? Thanks so much! I was really worried about it because it was sappy free verse and he first thing I've put up. It means a lot to me for you to say that.
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no prob, free verse is usually the best when writing about stuff like this
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True, you don't have to change what you want it to say so it rhymes or anythiing.
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EEEEEE!!!! WHO WHO WHO!!!!!!!!!!! TELL RIA NOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Number 1: That's not telling me what you think of it.
Number 2: I won't tell you any more until you actually tell me what you think. I want to know!
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i think its really good. it has a lot of feeling, like saddness and maybe a slight bit of hope you know (or think) is useless. so yeah i like it a lot.
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Thank you. I was really worried, it being my first deviation posted and a sappy free-verse poem at that.It means a lot to me to hear you say that.
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yw. and u of all ppl should know ive written sappier
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Yeah, but it just seems different to me because I wrote this one, you know?
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I totally get it, and not only does it make sense, but its GREAT!!! i cannot believe this is the first thing youve submitted! WRITE SOMMORE PLZ!
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Really? Thanks so much! I was really worried because it was sappy free verse, so it means a lot to me to hear you say that. I actually have written another one, but I'm saving it for a different time. Why van't you believe it's the first thing I've submitted?
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because its so good that i cant believe you havent submitted other stuff because you were shy
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I really appreciate that, but you know I have a shy side. This shouldn't really surprise you. Besides, I thought it was stupid when I put this one up.
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only half way. Part of me thinks it was stupid 'cause I still think it's kinda bad but I'm happy that people like it, but I also kinda think so because of how much it says. if you know what I mean which i think you will.
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Yeah what? You think it's stupid or you know what I mean or both?
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yeah i get what youre saying
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What does that mean in this context?
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it means that i understood what you said about three comments ago, but after i read a book and went to dinner, i totally forgot what it was we were talking about
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lol, fair enough, but what did I ask you if you understood that long ago?
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*hangs head in shame* pathetic us
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lol, but we have too much fun to be pathetic
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i think thats the pathetic part!
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why? that doesn't make sense, not that we ever really do.
P.S. I used the "original" button to see what you had responded, and I almost always have to do that. How pathetic and fitting!
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