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Booknerd135 — If Only
Published: 2010-03-10 02:02:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 7
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Description If Only

If only I could tell you how I feel,
You would know how much I admire you
For just being yourself.
You would know how perfect I think you are.
If only I didn't feel so conflicted,
You would know how much you mean to me.
I would tell you how you're so much better
Than you allow yourself to think you are.
If only I could tell you how I think I love you.
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Comments: 13

babymonkey4lyfe [2010-05-02 00:25:06 +0000 UTC]

O_O omg this is AMAZING...

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gukla [2010-03-16 14:49:52 +0000 UTC]

It's a great piece !

Sweet and sad at the same time! Really beatiful and intriguing words, even if they come from something that doesn't make you smile...
You should be proud of it ! Believe me, it's not so easy to find someone that is able to write in such a consice and intense way as you do, especially if we are speaking to write down emotions like pain for love!

So, infinite compliments to you, because you have talent and you are able to communicate what you feel in such a superb way! Be proud of your pieces, of your skills and talent as writer, of your maturity !
I know I will never get bored of your little masterpieces, now I know I'm in love with them ~<3!

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Booknerd135 In reply to gukla [2010-03-16 20:08:33 +0000 UTC]

My goodness, thank you so much for all of that!

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gukla In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-17 13:07:36 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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darkelvenfaerie [2010-03-11 03:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Mushy or not it is still a very good poem.

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Booknerd135 In reply to darkelvenfaerie [2010-03-11 19:59:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. it means a lot to have people besides my friends tell me what they think about my poems.

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emilyride [2010-03-10 23:43:07 +0000 UTC]

well I think its great!

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Booknerd135 In reply to emilyride [2010-03-10 23:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you so much! You OK if I write another one and post it too?

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emilyride In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-10 23:53:15 +0000 UTC]

totally! you've inspired me to give this kind of poetry a try haha

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Booknerd135 In reply to emilyride [2010-03-10 23:55:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks, again. Seriously? I'll be watching for it! Why the "haha"?

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emilyride In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-11 00:12:51 +0000 UTC]

cuz can you SEE me writing mushy poetry?

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Booknerd135 In reply to emilyride [2010-03-11 00:14:28 +0000 UTC]

no, but i couldn't see me writing it either.

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emilyride In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-03-11 00:57:19 +0000 UTC]

touche

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