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Published: 2010-03-08 20:58:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Shattered HeartYour dream has finally come true
But it's my worst nightmare.
I put on a smile and try to look happy
But my heart's being torn to pieces.
I run before you can see
The tears you cause me to shed.
You're floating on a cloud
And I'm creating a flood.
You got your happy ending,
But what about mine?
I thought, just maybe, you could love me
And I really thought I loved you.
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Comments: 18
Shattered Heart...
I think with the way you wrote this poem...
Many people can relate to this poem...
I think you should try to enter the contest over at Poetry Contest
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Really? Thank you, I think.
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I-I don't know what to type in this comment... this poetry just made me spechless.
For all the bitterness and the sadness that every words speaks about.
Gorgeous and impressive as always, but this one made my stomach twitchs...!
It's not mushy at all. Instead you can feel, like it's something you have right in front of your eyes, you can touch with your hands, you can heard clearly... it's real, it tells something true and deep, something that shouldn't be taken too slightly, something that you're suffering for.
But remember. This pain will make you grow up, will make you mature, will make you stronger and wiser, will teach you something.
Life is well known to be unfair, so we have to be brave and try our best to take the best and the most from everthing that happens in our lives. Sorry if I'm so optimistic, hope I don't sound too annoying 
Well, I wish you the best again, and again and again 
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You're not annoying, don't worry about it. Actually, you're extremely helpful. Thank you, as always.
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Oh, this is a relief, actually
I hate to be annoying to anyone, so I'm glad to hear that... ho ho.
You're most welcome 
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this is really sweet, if there's a story behind it you can note me!! 
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there is, and as much as I would love to note you, more than anyone, i can't for reasons i'm not allowing myself to explain
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thank you, really. Right now would NOT be the time to press for information
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**fangirl scream. then cries a river** SO GOOD! IM PROUD OF MY LITTLE PUPIL!!!!!!!
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Thanks a lot!, but why am I your pupil and why does my Shattered Heart get a fangirl scream?
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fangirl scream = cuz its good
and ur my pupil cuz u must have gotten ur sappiness from reading my sappiness
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thank you, but not really. I've always had it, I just don't usually show it.
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