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Published: 2006-02-23 20:54:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description The lights are off and all is quiet,
in the middle of the room lays a box.
Around the box the world revolves.
Moments lost forever save for those who hold them.
Dreams fading fast to mists of morning light.
Light turning toward darkness in the end.
And to the box they cling.
As if inside holds something which could save them,
but upon opening they find it empty, hollow, worth nothing.
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Comments: 8

GoodbyeBlueMonday [2006-07-13 21:52:44 +0000 UTC]

this is beautifully written.
totally know what you're saying.

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to GoodbyeBlueMonday [2006-07-16 14:42:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much

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XmorbidbloodX [2006-02-25 00:24:35 +0000 UTC]

Damn! I love this so much!!

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to XmorbidbloodX [2006-02-25 12:27:28 +0000 UTC]

awwww thank you.

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lordbeazy [2006-02-23 23:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to lordbeazy [2006-02-24 16:32:33 +0000 UTC]

probably. x thank you very much.

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hitchcockm00 [2006-02-23 22:34:33 +0000 UTC]

This is good.
It reminds me of Heart Shaped Box by Nirvana, probably just because of the box references but yeah.
I like the imagery, especially the "mists of morning light".

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to hitchcockm00 [2006-02-23 23:10:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you. hee hee yes i use the word box! again thank you.

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hitchcockm00 In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2006-02-23 23:28:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. hehe yes indeed.
You're welcome again.

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