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bouncing-splitpin — Losing You
Published: 2005-05-02 21:05:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 161; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description I'm so scared of losing you
I fear you dont believe
I've got my arms around you
So tight you cannot breathe

I need to know you listen
Stayed quiet far too long
I have to know you want me
And here's where i belong

I'd like to know you love me
If its not too much to say
Without, my fear of losing you
Grows deeper by the day
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Comments: 10

lordbeazy [2005-08-08 10:04:23 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to lordbeazy [2005-08-08 20:40:13 +0000 UTC]

he did but it was a long time ago and inspired by one of marks scrap lines so im ok. thank you for the lovely comments!

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matt1783 [2005-05-05 20:32:32 +0000 UTC]

wow that is a great poem it has really touched me. im glad you decided to submit your stuff

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to matt1783 [2005-05-05 21:15:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you! I was kinda still really happy & hyper from the sunshine when i submitted it but i guess im glad i did!!

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taeliac [2005-05-04 18:38:19 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, I like it! A lot...

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to taeliac [2005-05-04 19:34:47 +0000 UTC]

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuu

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taeliac In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-05-04 21:40:52 +0000 UTC]

No problem!! Hope to see more stuffs ^_____^

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to taeliac [2005-05-05 21:21:21 +0000 UTC]

i'll try!

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hitchcockm00 [2005-05-04 17:51:14 +0000 UTC]

yay! so great!!!
*is honoured that my line started it off*

(my lines are the first 2 btw people)

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to hitchcockm00 [2005-05-04 19:38:06 +0000 UTC]

hee hee thank you very much! Glad i made u honoured!

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hitchcockm00 In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-05-04 19:43:35 +0000 UTC]

hehe you're very welcome!!
hehe ok.

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