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bouncing-splitpin — My life 2
Published: 2005-06-01 19:27:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description I long to help, to share,
to feel.
So all I'm asking is your
love, your trust, your patience.
Take me in and
shelter me, from the harsh reality
of what i come to realise is
my life.
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Comments: 14

lordbeazy [2005-08-29 15:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to lordbeazy [2005-08-30 20:03:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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lucky-tweak [2005-06-20 04:20:34 +0000 UTC]

I understand that feeling
nice work

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to lucky-tweak [2005-06-20 13:08:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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lucky-tweak In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-06-20 14:15:44 +0000 UTC]

go through my poetry

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to lucky-tweak [2005-06-20 20:32:30 +0000 UTC]

k

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dark-oblivion2 [2005-06-02 03:37:37 +0000 UTC]

To reiterate from my comment on "My life 1"...

you seemed to change your rhythm a little and it works ever so nicely. I also relate to this poem. I would like someone to take me away from what is my life. I'm definitely feeling ya on this poem.

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to dark-oblivion2 [2005-06-03 20:58:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much i was really worried about putting these up but thank you for being nice!!

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dark-oblivion2 In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-06-04 05:12:33 +0000 UTC]

just telling the truth. and no need to be worried.

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to dark-oblivion2 [2005-06-05 20:22:06 +0000 UTC]

awwww thank you!

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hitchcockm00 [2005-06-01 23:15:06 +0000 UTC]

y didn't u put those life ones as one poem?

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to hitchcockm00 [2005-06-03 20:54:45 +0000 UTC]

because i worote them seperately and, i dunno im silly??

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hitchcockm00 In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-06-09 16:51:33 +0000 UTC]

hehe ok, not silly.

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to hitchcockm00 [2005-06-09 19:51:18 +0000 UTC]

yay not silly!!!! thank you im feeling proud now!

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hitchcockm00 In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-06-10 17:35:09 +0000 UTC]

hehe. you're welcome

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