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bouncing-splitpin — Seven Years
Published: 2005-05-09 19:33:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Seven years I've lived this hell
Afraid to speak my mind
Your time is up it's too late now
I wont commit my crime
Everything it fades to black
I cant control my thoughts
Its too hard alone for me to bear
It shall forever hurt
I'll run and run too scared to stop
Brick walls they trap my path
I'll never escape always confined
I'll welcome in the dark
I'll curl into a corner but hold my head up high
For when it rips me down inside I'll never show you why
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bouncing-splitpin - Monsters of the Earth
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lordbeazy [2005-08-25 13:02:08 +0000 UTC]

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to lordbeazy [2005-08-27 17:38:03 +0000 UTC]

yeah it was the first one that i wrote i think. it was on a feeling in the spurr of the moment so i guess i was feeling conflicted at the time. thank you for the nice comments. ill try and be kick ass!

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lucky-tweak [2005-06-20 04:23:16 +0000 UTC]

woooooooooooo i like!

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to lucky-tweak [2005-06-20 13:12:43 +0000 UTC]

yay! cool, im glad coz it was an old one!

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matt1783 [2005-05-11 14:59:15 +0000 UTC]

yay becky! well done! thats really good. i like this poem cos it flows nicely and had good meaning to it

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to matt1783 [2005-05-11 19:52:12 +0000 UTC]

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to matt1783 [2005-05-11 19:45:09 +0000 UTC]

thank youuuuuu sooooo very much!!!!

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matt1783 In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-05-17 11:12:37 +0000 UTC]

its ok

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hitchcockm00 [2005-05-11 12:01:13 +0000 UTC]

very goood.

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to hitchcockm00 [2005-05-11 13:32:57 +0000 UTC]

hee hee thanx

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hitchcockm00 In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-05-12 19:07:10 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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scatter-brain [2005-05-09 20:02:37 +0000 UTC]

great
just had a rather big argument with my parents
and i feel kind of similar to this poem
anyway
have a

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to scatter-brain [2005-05-09 21:07:37 +0000 UTC]

thank youuuuuuuuu!!!! Wow! Thanks!

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scatter-brain In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-05-09 21:33:03 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!!

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