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Published: 2005-06-20 13:23:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Tears running down my face
Dreams of things I cant embrace
No one here to dry my eyes
No one left to hear my cries
Remains of dreams to which i clutch
My faith left in your final touch
False hopes of which i long to chase
Deep longing just to leave this place
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Comments: 12

lordbeazy [2005-08-24 10:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to lordbeazy [2005-08-27 17:35:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you i like rhymes as well sometimes they fit. Dont cry please, how can i make it better?

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lordbeazy In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-08-27 20:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to lordbeazy [2005-08-30 19:59:43 +0000 UTC]

ok then.

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hitchcockm00 [2005-06-28 23:48:02 +0000 UTC]

really god! The rhyming works well .Nice rhythm.
Really good.

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to hitchcockm00 [2005-06-29 21:31:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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hitchcockm00 In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-06-29 23:02:54 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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dark-oblivion2 [2005-06-27 22:13:50 +0000 UTC]

beautiful. wonderful flow with the rhymes.

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to dark-oblivion2 [2005-06-28 21:54:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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scatter-brain [2005-06-21 18:11:32 +0000 UTC]

i like it. and especially because the last line reminds me of razorlight.

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to scatter-brain [2005-06-21 22:00:42 +0000 UTC]

YAY! thank you! I love razorlight!

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scatter-brain In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-06-22 07:42:26 +0000 UTC]

yay, me too

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lucky-tweak [2005-06-20 14:18:47 +0000 UTC]

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bouncing-splitpin In reply to lucky-tweak [2005-06-20 20:34:20 +0000 UTC]

thank youuuuu

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