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Published: 2005-06-05 20:51:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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How can i help you, if you wontlet me in?
Why can i not save you from
bitter memories.
Still devided by my
failure. As as a friend, as a lover,
as a person.
How can i change with the past
a sea of black i long to drown in.
To paint the foam red with blood and
slip, to the peace my mind treads.
Why do i run the course paved for me
by those i hate?
Afraid to stop, too confined,
scared and alone.
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cool
over and out, love and peace!!!
P.S. it struck me...
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thank you very much!
yay
hope in a good way!
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Another nice poem
i love this line
Why do i run the course paved for me"
Very good
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thank you i like that line 2!
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thats good. I dunno if it was intended but to me it seems to convey something like the jumbled thought process of a confused person who is "scared and alone".
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thank you, yeah it was mainly thoughts and stuff.
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you're welcome. ok.
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you paint an interesting picture in someones head with this poem, i like it
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I love it. I relate to this so much, most of which I wish I didn't.
But, alas, it is as always, beautifully expressed and written. I love your unique style and flow. It reads very idiosyncratically. Its very distinctive in language and for that, I love it even more.
Plus, your imagery is to die for.
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Thank you sooo much! I really like this one and im sooo glad u can relate in a non evil way i meant that well *shuts up*. Thank you so much for likeing it, i love your work so im very proud u think mines good!! Yay!! awww u made my day better!
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And I'm so glad my honesty is being used to make people's lives better.
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