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Mind if I give a slight critique?
If you do, continue reading if not, just don't read the rest. ^w^
So from the side view of the face I can see that you drew an ear facing the front, but not the other ear.
The forehead looks a bit too wide, and the eye too far away from the nose.
The nose also seems a bit off center, as the nose is at the very tip of the muzzle, in the middle.
The right paw (In the air) Is a lot different from the others, a lot more round and clumpy, but your other paws are fine, though a bit small for the body.
And the tail is also very very big, and too low. The tail is connected to the spine, so it should be aligned more with the back.
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um I know your giving her a critique but i thought I'd say something about the tail.It's suppose to be very long and big.Starbucks has a very long and big tail cuz she's part snow leopard.Witch means her tail weighs a lot more then a normal cats,so it normally drags on the ground.Although when she's really happy,sad or mad she lifts it.I'm not trying to be mean but I just wanted to say that.
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The way it was drawn it looked like some type of dog.
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Thank you for the critique. I noticed about the lifted leg while drawing, but didn't fix it. And I will keep the other things in mind too. <3 Thanks!
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