Rosebud1313 [2004-06-16 10:15:30 +0000 UTC]

How lovely it is to feel as one with someone.

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kamelin [2004-01-11 02:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Little tiny words and big fat favorite ::hands you a wad o' dough::

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discern [2003-12-27 19:13:15 +0000 UTC]

i like the brevity in this, -

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mightymadness [2003-12-11 19:34:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow... something about this... i like... *shrugs*

Nice Sally.

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fei-fei [2003-12-05 15:52:27 +0000 UTC]

this is cool sally!! *hugs* you rock ^_^

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emotionlessangel [2003-12-05 02:12:25 +0000 UTC]

this is really beautiful...there's so much meaning in just a few words. i love it.

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badblokebob [2003-12-04 16:07:41 +0000 UTC]

I like it, though I have to wonder about the second stanza. It's just the rest of the poem seems generally positive, whilst that's something of a down beat note. Maybe it's meant to be that way, or possibly I've interpreted the poem a different way to how it was written (always good when that happens ), but I still figured I'd mention it.

The ending's good -- implying that you're one person, not two seperate people... I just like that, and it's really nicely conveyed with the breathing repetition

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alwayzdazd [2003-12-04 14:50:05 +0000 UTC]

it all ties intogether very nicely, and so many stages of emotions...awesome piece.

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Kiwi070620 [2003-12-04 14:13:08 +0000 UTC]

oh wow..i love it. This is really great.

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