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Published: 2004-07-14 22:52:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 324; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 25
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Description Alone in this dark room
Spiders are spinning their webs around my heart.

Tied to an oak chair
The crows peck at my flesh.

Decaying soul
Ambered eyes
Nails longing to rip open your skin

Blood longing, rusting steel
My hands have lost all feeling

Dangling over the edge
The birds swoop and plant their claws in my flesh

…Needing just
One more breath

Longing only…
One more injection of poison into my veins.
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Comments: 12

wynter-rain [2005-04-19 17:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Blimey....I love your writing!!!!

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braceletsofsmoke In reply to wynter-rain [2005-04-20 01:11:15 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks

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Dimentia [2005-02-06 22:04:21 +0000 UTC]

This is brilliant I really love it. Dark, powerful and depressing and also amazing

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Dimentia [2005-02-06 22:01:09 +0000 UTC]

This is brilliant I love it. Dark, powerful and depressing but still really like it

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amandamarie [2004-08-20 15:56:56 +0000 UTC]

"Spiders are spinning their webs around my heart."

i absolutly love this line. the beginning of the poem is amazing,
the very last line seems kind of misplaced though.

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coolositymax [2004-08-05 23:12:27 +0000 UTC]

My my, you're a cheery soul aren't you?

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badblokebob [2004-07-20 06:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Dark and disturbing Definitely got the right category, I think!!

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alwayzdazd [2004-07-18 21:49:21 +0000 UTC]

nice, nice flow along with the destructive images. haunting piece.

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notrust [2004-07-18 03:22:07 +0000 UTC]

I love the eerie flow of it, and fantastic imagery.

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tripleeight [2004-07-16 17:48:08 +0000 UTC]

wow.. that's pretty powerful. I love the imagary.

"Alone in this dark room
Spiders are spinning their webs around my heart."

I love that.

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wardy360 [2004-07-15 17:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Interesting! evil! Cruel!

Great stuff, very simple and straight to the point!

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Rosebud1313 [2004-07-15 04:30:11 +0000 UTC]

Nice! Very chilling...

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