Rosebud1313 [2004-06-16 10:04:56 +0000 UTC]

Nice job... Ghosts of the past... *Sighs*

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Rosebud1313 [2004-06-16 10:04:56 +0000 UTC]

Nice job... Ghosts of the past... *Sighs*

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Kuathi [2003-09-16 18:44:34 +0000 UTC]

This poem makes me feel nostalgic. I'm getting it as long lost thoughts, memories, and dreams. This is a very nice piece.

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brwncow [2003-08-26 06:38:48 +0000 UTC]

It's the realization that no matter how bright it is at 1pm, it's always dark at night.

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alwayzdazd [2003-08-24 23:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Never to be free
Release is a joke

I\'m forever to be haunted
By my faceless ghosts

How true this is..

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angeljunkie [2003-08-20 21:19:43 +0000 UTC]

i know that feeling all too well... and you've done a superb job of capturing it.

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mech61 [2003-08-20 21:14:39 +0000 UTC]

I think weve all been haunted by memories we dont wish to keep. So i can relate, again you did a fabulous job.

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snappedchopstick [2003-08-20 14:30:15 +0000 UTC]

Ooh... nice. Ghosts are always good fun. =]

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emersed [2003-08-18 22:15:18 +0000 UTC]

nice and haunting experience..... I do feel this would make a good song also...... I agree with jo kr some of us can relate.

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no1tofallbackon [2003-08-18 16:54:48 +0000 UTC]

whoa i can picture this as a song, like.. spoken.. of u've ever heard mercury rising by from autumn to ashes thats what i mean

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angelrollin [2003-08-18 01:36:42 +0000 UTC]

it looks so awsome

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badblokebob [2003-08-04 20:08:47 +0000 UTC]

I like the picture

(not to say I dislike the poem, lol, but I've got nothing intelligent to say about it... just one of those days)

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tilt176 [2003-08-04 12:27:17 +0000 UTC]

creepy
very nice work.

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jo-kr [2003-08-03 14:38:53 +0000 UTC]

Very haunting, if you excuse the pun. A song of sorrow in a world of joy. Great poem. Something some of us can associate with :/

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