Rosebud1313 [2004-06-16 10:18:25 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem! It's so tender...

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shadowedpoet [2004-02-05 03:18:12 +0000 UTC]

marvelous....

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emotionlessangel [2004-01-30 21:53:32 +0000 UTC]

jolly good! i love it!

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rubenesque [2004-01-28 21:15:45 +0000 UTC]

Very Very beautiful.

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alwayzdazd [2004-01-28 18:54:57 +0000 UTC]

i like...and yes..boredom can do weird things to ya

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discern [2004-01-27 23:57:59 +0000 UTC]

quite so.

rather calming, if only. the fith stanza is the grasp that i imagined through the piece.

wondering.

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devilishlycrazy [2004-01-27 21:58:16 +0000 UTC]

this is great, the imagery comes across well & easily, it's a really sweet piece, nice work

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badblokebob [2004-01-26 22:19:59 +0000 UTC]

[Posh English Voice]I shall comment on this in the form of a numbered list:

1) Very cool title.
2) Very cool poem.
3) I like the imagery. The cold and dark are both excellent ideas to relate to the feelings evoked.
4) The initial meaning appears obvious, yet there are still personal interpretations to be made and things to be thought about.

All in all, I found it to be a rather enjoyable experience. Good job old chum.[/PEV]

Hehe

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Kiwi070620 [2004-01-26 22:03:01 +0000 UTC]

This is great...I feel the same way missing my sweetheart. I wish he was in my arms right now....I love this so much...great job.

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