sashima [2016-01-04 12:25:10 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

From the day i first saw your pictures to even now, I've loved your art.

You've improved so much over the years. This is amazing.

You really capture the scene well, making it come off as a realistic drawing. Looking at it you can really catch the sense of ugency involved.

Though if I had to say anything about the picture (mind you I have far less drawing experience than you when you started)

Things in the picture have a very strong line (granted this comes with most drawing styles) such as her face is very distinct object in frame, her hair, and her shirt. You've done a great job of creating a level of depth and layers using those things, as well as shading. The only thing that comes off to me is the bottom left of the drawing where her hair rests on her shoulder. It's probably because the of the right side of the picture, but the way it's put it almost appears that her arm is crossing in front of her hair. (it may be, and I'm just bad at recognizing the perspective.

Honestly it's nothing big, the picture still looks great to me. that just strikes me a little odd, as well I feel there would be more shading from her hair in the middle, but that's just me.

Anyway I hope I wasn't out of place in making this critique, obviously my level of drawing talent is far less than yours.

Love the hair, it flows well, Love the mouth play, It really blends well and you can sense as if you're actually watching her play with the poor tiny. The shading and layering of her face and skin are great, and you get a real sense of depth.

The shirt is the only thing that struck me as odd in any sense or fashion.

Thanks for your time ^^

Concerning my rating, >> I don't really know what vision means, I think it means what I interperet your intention of the drawing and I think you nailed it.

Originality, I think compared to your other works it's a one of a kind

Technique, I think you're technique is amazing, just... i'm taking off personal feelings points concerning the shirt which I put more detail above obviously

Impact. Blown away by the feeling of how real this could be like I was standing there watching her XD


sorry if you feel my critique was too mean or nice or just weird and bad in general, don't critique much @.@

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cocotapioka [2016-01-03 11:42:43 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, looks tasty. 

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ipanick [2012-09-06 04:41:48 +0000 UTC]

this is owesome

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AlishaCraftsCutesies [2012-02-04 02:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Hi =]
Just wanted to let you know I am making a new group. It's called Fetish-House. I just wanted to let you know, incase you might be interested in joining ^^
Here's my blog, and a list of fetishes that will be in my new group. If there's anything missing please let me know!

Here's teh link [link]

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dollcollector999 [2011-12-26 08:34:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh, I love your stuff.

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chris170389 [2011-12-25 15:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Its excellent I love this Amethyst ^^

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UndefinedError [2011-12-25 15:15:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow, the coloring is spectacular! I for one absolutely love how you did the saliva.

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Black-Boo [2011-12-25 02:07:29 +0000 UTC]

Ehhhh....the saliva could use a bit of work, it seems too predictable and the drops are too numerous. Giving the tongue a shiny texture would have sufficed and given it the appearance of salivation.

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