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Next: [link]"Get out, RainbowDash! Just get out!" a gruff female voice could be heard echoing throughout the beach resort. And as the voice commanded, I was out of the hut faster than you can say 20% cooler.
I wanted to just dash off. To fly away but my wings wouldn't work. It was as if they were glued against my torso and they wouldn't release. No matter how hard I tried I couldn't move. It felt not only my wings were glued together, but my hooves were welded to the soft sand. It didn't matter anyway, for the first time since a few months ago I had absolutely no energy. I wanted to dig into this sand and never come out of the hole I was in.
Instead of even running I slumped against the door of the hut, tears streaming down my face but no sound was heard. It was as if I couldn't cry but my body was. Was I sad? Hurt? It was hard to tell. For the last few months I felt that pain continuously. It was almost as if I had gone numb. I wanted to shout. I wanted to yell, but my mouth was too dry and every attempt at a cry was cut off by my breath forcefully cutting itself off.
I lay like this for at least a half an hour, thinking back to how things were. You see, it wasn't always like this. I wasn't this sad pathetic pile formally known as Rainbow Dash you see today. No. I was happy. This time two years ago I was happy as I could ever be. Not just because I had met my friends, but because I met her with them. And now it's because of her that I sit here, crying, defeated, empty. All I have now are the memories. The memories of how it was....
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Okay so this is for my Flutterdash fic. I decided to do a flash forward instead of starting the story, as no matter how long I thought I couldn't think of a good way to start, but knew how it would sort of go! So I went with that.
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Comments: 44
CJwolf1 [2013-08-15 20:58:20 +0000 UTC]
I love this and i cant wait to read more, I don't think ShiraMess (my character pony) will like this story so much (he and Dash are in love.. and have two filly's)
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Wait0wat [2013-06-05 00:15:38 +0000 UTC]
So this is how tit started...Man I gotta read more of this....if only i had the time.
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Nymphedorra [2012-12-24 23:37:39 +0000 UTC]
Can I just say I LOVE these? I absolutely adore your style. What paint program do you use? I'm curious to know because I'm actually trying to develop a better style with my tablet.
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JasonSonicZombie [2012-10-11 08:32:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god your photo and short description for your photo has totally blown me away so I must ask if I may use your photo for my story cover, for a Sequel to a FanFiction I am currently involved with. Your photo is perfect for the Sequel!
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GarethJason In reply to JasonSonicZombie [2012-10-16 21:17:43 +0000 UTC]
You should click the [Next] link this fanfic is the most amazing one i have read ever!
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Flog343 In reply to Flog343 [2012-09-09 21:45:39 +0000 UTC]
just wow... great story, have to read on
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MummifiedThunderbird [2012-09-09 09:58:19 +0000 UTC]
Oh hey look really good art... wait a minute... OH NO! Its also a fan-fiction. DAM IT! And its good... *sigh* dam it. And here I was thinking I was going to be off to bed. Nope! Alright lets read this awesome fan-Fiction.
I'm joking, I think its good. I cant wait to see how it goes.
Quick question, is this also on FIM-FIC.net?
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Insanity-Ensues [2012-08-31 00:18:29 +0000 UTC]
You know, I think it will actually all get better. And there will be FlutterDash and a happy end.
...I can dream...
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Fallenpeach [2012-07-19 01:58:48 +0000 UTC]
Wow.. beautifully written Can't wait to read more c:
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RaenBoow [2012-07-13 18:23:50 +0000 UTC]
oh shit O-o I thought the next one was the begining.... Seems it was deeper than that
You need to set a previous on the next one though
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to RaenBoow [2012-07-16 16:52:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah lol I did that now :,3
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13lovemillion [2012-07-12 18:43:51 +0000 UTC]
it's another cry pony! *hits* XD jk
this is really good. but it's f**ing sad
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to 13lovemillion [2012-07-12 21:08:58 +0000 UTC]
I KNOW IM SUH SORREH XD
thank youuu!!
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Thehappytyler [2012-07-12 00:53:15 +0000 UTC]
I'm hoping this is not one of those fanfics that make me cry. ; . ;
I'm a sucker for a fanfic, just not sad ones. ; . ;
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to Thehappytyler [2012-07-12 03:46:50 +0000 UTC]
Hopefully not D: I tried to base it more on a realistic relationship. Don't worry though! There's tons of happy~
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tallon567 In reply to Bread-Crumbz [2012-08-04 18:53:25 +0000 UTC]
If that ends up being fluttershy in the hut im gonna live out the rest of my life cutting myslef
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Neutralbrony [2012-07-11 18:39:20 +0000 UTC]
THIS HAS MY ATTENTION! Nice work on the painting!
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to Neutralbrony [2012-07-12 03:47:16 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!!! And with a name like Neutralbrony it makes me feel like an honor to get your attention hehe :>
thanks so much!
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Neutralbrony In reply to Bread-Crumbz [2012-07-12 05:14:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh, well thank you very much. It's just a name i chose when I signed up on DA, so its not like I'm with a big audiance or hold any gift in drawing art.
I just like to giv shout outs on art pieces that strike my attention when I know someone has put in hard work and effort, because being praised for you hard work really is a nice feeling
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guerreroperdido [2012-07-11 07:37:42 +0000 UTC]
Ah, so this is the forward in the comic. The conflict. Interesting. Will definitely like to see how this is built.
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to guerreroperdido [2012-07-12 03:47:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! It will be worth it!
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KonanHio [2012-07-10 13:43:46 +0000 UTC]
*slap* you said for someone to hit you if you made another pony cry
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LillyTheOmegaWolf [2012-07-10 00:59:47 +0000 UTC]
Um ok... I'm interested to read the rest of the fic now. But at the same time I'm not so keen for a RD Fluttershy break up story.
Nicely stylized image there though.
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to LillyTheOmegaWolf [2012-07-10 01:01:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh don't worry...I dont want to spoil anything but this isn't the end, more like a middle part
and thanks~
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LillyTheOmegaWolf In reply to Bread-Crumbz [2012-07-10 09:23:51 +0000 UTC]
Ok. Well, I'm keen to read it as soon as you are willing to share it.
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