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Published: 2012-04-26 14:27:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 200; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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Description While darkness sketches your eyes
Time whispers your name in my breath,
I recall your hand through my hair
Your smile through my heart
You are heaven's mile
With its stolen smile,
The rush of august kisses lay on your lips
The warmth of innocence your eyes keep,
You are life's gift,
And nature's rift
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breadth - I am.
Comments: 13

KubatheLost [2012-09-10 17:19:34 +0000 UTC]

This poem of love has whispered to my heart,
and strung its strings. Brilliantly gorgeous, a truly lovely love poem

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Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2012-05-07 20:09:04 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful I really love this one

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breadth In reply to Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2012-05-08 10:55:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you Saida; for everything

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Mrs-Freestar-Bul In reply to breadth [2012-05-08 12:43:10 +0000 UTC]

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IndraMJha [2012-04-27 13:24:24 +0000 UTC]

cool. your gf is lucky.

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breadth In reply to IndraMJha [2012-04-27 18:55:42 +0000 UTC]

in that case there is no one lucky..........
thanks for liking it.

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IndraMJha In reply to breadth [2012-04-28 08:49:20 +0000 UTC]

why there is no one lucky ??
are you sad ?

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FeroniaAutumn [2012-04-26 17:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Lovely poem!
You could surely win a girl's heart with this.

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breadth In reply to FeroniaAutumn [2012-04-26 18:04:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Kay-March [2012-04-26 16:44:45 +0000 UTC]

I know only one person besides me who uses and abuses of the ellipses (...) to explain an emotion, like a distant look in a movie screen.
You dear friend... sucha a beautiful poem...

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breadth In reply to Kay-March [2012-04-26 17:06:51 +0000 UTC]


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Kay-March In reply to breadth [2012-04-27 15:20:23 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome...

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vsyo-vremya [2012-04-26 15:28:35 +0000 UTC]

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breadth In reply to vsyo-vremya [2012-04-26 15:49:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you...........

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