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Published: 2015-01-27 22:10:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 963; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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It feels like falling........creeping through piping nightmares.
The voices scream while the eyes listen,
dark miles,
with every breath a needle through the heart.
Chest deep, gasping in a shade of pain
the sun unapologetic under the veil of the night
darting needles racing through the heart.
…....................................................................................................
Cold footsteps resonate
staff emerge within a cloudy sight
the caped darkness walks not a myth
a rush of smile on a platter of hope............
The promise of death becomes mercy.
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Comments: 5
Kay-March [2015-02-01 10:32:34 +0000 UTC]
Man, I've miss your dots... No one else makes such pauses in poems like you do, it causes such an effect that only a few realizes how deep they can be constructing feelings around poems and vice versa.
The 1st stanza makes its marke and it carries one through this intense inner voyage. I love it!!
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breadth In reply to Kay-March [2015-02-01 13:11:08 +0000 UTC]
and i LOVE you for loving it .
thanks! for the support
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Kay-March In reply to breadth [2015-02-01 17:32:09 +0000 UTC]
You're always so very welcome!
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