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breadth — can i be?
Published: 2012-04-03 11:15:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 213; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description Can I be?
What you want me to be
Can I see?
What you want me to see
Should I look into the flower?
And tell you what I see
With a smile,
Smile smile smile
Let me be the gate;
In the cloud of your dreams
So you do not have to dream
Any longer,
Yes, this is what I need to be.
Can I be?
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breadth - I am.
Comments: 11

galebron [2012-04-04 08:09:26 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!! Selfless/selfish now I'm thinking.

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breadth In reply to galebron [2012-04-04 09:49:22 +0000 UTC]

i always look forward to reading your comments, you have a way of incorporating wisdom in every aspect of poetry; people like you make me see deeper levels in myself.
thank you.

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Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2012-04-03 19:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful, it played softly with my emotions My favorite part :
Let me be the gate;
In the cloud of your dreams
So you do not have to dream
Any longer,

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breadth In reply to Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2012-04-03 19:56:05 +0000 UTC]

your kind of comment keeps me writing saida,

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Mrs-Freestar-Bul In reply to breadth [2012-04-03 20:00:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy with your words.

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Kay-March [2012-04-03 16:52:12 +0000 UTC]

Questions... questions...

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breadth In reply to Kay-March [2012-04-03 17:02:41 +0000 UTC]

questions all the way

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Kay-March In reply to breadth [2012-04-03 19:26:11 +0000 UTC]

Yes, and so little answers or none what so ever.

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breadth In reply to Kay-March [2012-04-03 19:30:14 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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FeroniaAutumn [2012-04-03 12:51:38 +0000 UTC]

It defines love as selfish in my opinion.
I guess it's just how you look at it...

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breadth In reply to FeroniaAutumn [2012-04-03 13:11:43 +0000 UTC]

and again in another perspective it is selfish;
we always want our love for our self only

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