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Published: 2012-03-13 14:22:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 238; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 5
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Description Immortality.
The first poem;
The immortality of her face
Makes time smile at her smile,
Nature's gift
To every eye that sees her
What is abstruse in such a poem?
Flawless
A fairy-tale would not be better
The rising sun;
Is the ambrosia of her being.
Her name
A signet to the book of time
A name
Written on the pages of my heart
Forever a friend of time.
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Comments: 8

AleciaMaria [2012-04-14 22:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Very good! Was beautiful and unique!!

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breadth In reply to AleciaMaria [2012-04-16 10:06:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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AleciaMaria In reply to breadth [2012-04-16 12:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome!!!

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Kay-March [2012-03-18 01:03:47 +0000 UTC]

Poets know how the heart feels...

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Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2012-03-15 17:14:59 +0000 UTC]

Amazing The poem is gorgeous, and I totally agree with you. Love does make you feel so and love really does so

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breadth In reply to Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2012-03-15 18:08:53 +0000 UTC]

i am glad you agree so...........

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galebron [2012-03-14 08:41:47 +0000 UTC]

I need to show this to her, maybe she'll understand your words better than mine. (Love immortal - once loved is always loved)

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breadth In reply to galebron [2012-03-14 12:17:07 +0000 UTC]

please do...............
i really feel honored, thanks

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