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breadth — inking death
Published: 2012-06-26 14:51:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 212; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description A dagger in my clutch
My thirst for your blood drips by its tip
The death i seek to give lodge in my eyes
Silence dooms my hearing
I am cold and the moon knows
The stories of love are far beneath my feet

I will kill
The grim will learn upon your dying heart
I shall flood my patience with your blood
When i am done clothing the night in scarlet
The chapter of my anger shall befall your soul
As i make death's grip tighten on your soul
My blade will whispher "die" in your eyes,
Then time shall redefine death in my grace

tonight i am abyss
tonight my cravings manifest
tonight i am death
tonight i define a silent night
tonight you die, for my pages are dark
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Comments: 13

galebron [2012-07-20 12:34:38 +0000 UTC]

I don't consider my self a dark person but this left me craving for more. Scary! Especailly the last verse. ENJOYED! More?

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breadth In reply to galebron [2012-07-20 16:49:36 +0000 UTC]

i am glad you liked it

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kdawg09 [2012-07-03 03:44:26 +0000 UTC]

It too ke way to long to get to this and shame on me because this is wonserful. I can almost read it to get the anger out like people who listen to heavy metal or whatever.

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breadth In reply to kdawg09 [2012-07-03 11:08:46 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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kdawg09 In reply to breadth [2012-07-03 18:57:27 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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KubatheLost [2012-07-02 21:13:06 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed this very much! Great poem my friend

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breadth In reply to KubatheLost [2012-07-03 11:08:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2012-07-02 14:01:28 +0000 UTC]

Finally I see your dark side Amazing. I love this , so different from your style, absolutely wonderful my friend. It was scary, intriguing and intense

P.S You need to capitalize the "i" in I am

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breadth In reply to Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2012-07-02 14:36:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you.
correction noted

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Mrs-Freestar-Bul In reply to breadth [2012-07-02 14:47:53 +0000 UTC]

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Kay-March [2012-06-27 15:25:35 +0000 UTC]

Nice curtain to the dark side... My delight is on the last stanza... so good!

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breadth In reply to Kay-March [2012-06-28 11:53:45 +0000 UTC]

thanks....... i am glad you liked it

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Kay-March In reply to breadth [2012-06-29 16:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Very juicy!!

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