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nightash [2006-04-17 11:27:07 +0000 UTC]

I like the torso a lot But the rest of it's a little iffy.... as mentioned, the head seems a little off line.. and as a result of this the neck and shoulders looks sort of out, too, which is a pity because that really is a nice torso.. x___x The legs are quite sweet, however if you're going to redo the image then you might want to make them both the same length... currently the back (right) one is longer, since it's knee descends lower than the other and yet has a foot raised higher...... :S

Also, something about the pose seems sort of broken... However if you drew it on a different angle to the one where looking at here, that might be the reason... :S

Anyway, it's a sweet sketch and, once again, great job on the torso - I really like that belly!!

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nougat-centred [2006-04-17 09:41:56 +0000 UTC]

Good to see a little more subtle curvature in the mid region.
Most of the stuff ive seen of yours is pretty straight and 'vector-ish'. The anatomy there looks good.
The head looks a little off axis though, or like it's turned more than it should.

I hope you feel better now

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