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BreakoutForever β Ominous Revealed! (Spoiler Alert)
Published: 2015-06-11 22:02:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 4577; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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A little concept I did while I was writing a summery draft for the Breakout Stars plot.After Artie finds out that Ominous was a robot and that Captain Craas was behind the whole scheme, The former Space Hero Man-Child turned Psycho Man-Child hops into the Ominous Robot and uses it as a battle suit, and to kill our hero.
Yesh! And I thought Judge Doom was Disturbing. Β
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That would certainly be the twist no one would see coming. 0_0'
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(This will be the last time Bownsey appears, trust me, just go along with it please)
Bownsey: *throws a rock at Craas' head* Hey! Leave Mr Artie alone!
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IΒ think this music is appropriate for this scene.Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltv78uβ¦
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You still haven't moved on from that?
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would it be funny if Crass punted his head away?
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Yes.
And you didn't answer my question.
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it's just a funny idea that a villain like Ominous became nothing more than a Powerless head.
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It's an ok idea, But I'm not sure I want to do that yet.
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if you do make a sequel to your outline, would Crass beΒ the villain?
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Hmm. Maybe, unless I come up with a better villain to top the last.
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maybe Crass could team up with the new villain.
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Oh my god! HE'S the bad guy this whole time! And he's trying to kill Artie!
You bastard!
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Artie: I knew there was something I never liked about that guy.
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Let alone something so screwed up about him!
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Captain Craas: If I can't be the hero, NO ONE CAN!!
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but we trusted youΒ
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Ya know what man.....I know this is a parody of the climactic scene between Eddie Valiant and Judge Doom.
But the back story behind it also reminds me of Scrappy Doo from the 'Scooby Doo Movie.' You know; disgraced cartoon character gone rogue; hijacking a robot of sorts and using it to turn against his former crew. ....Seems that way to me. XD
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Yeah, that was another inspirational aspect to the Craas character. Along with a hint of Darla Dimple.
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Yeah that totally makes sense.
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After this, you should draw Crass in prison with him placed in the same cell with all of the villains and criminals he 'single handedly thwarted', who then give him the 'biggest, warmest welcoming from the bottom of their hearts'.
Laser guided karma taken up to 11. 
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Sounds like a plan. ^^
Although, I'll might have more ideas for Madelyn and Rip-tile.
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Well, whatever you come up with, I'm all for it.
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Β I Honestly imagined Ominous more of a last of his race type & trying to restore his people Ancient Glory or he is trying to motivate his people to rebuild their Space Empire.
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Well, sorry if you're disappointed.
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Oh Well, your their maker you make what is right or wrong, to make it simple to your toons you are their God. You may destroy or give life to a toon.
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You draw body proportions better than I do.
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I imaginingΒ Ominous's severed head in the background yelling "GIVE ME BACKΒ MY BODY!"
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Whatever you say.
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Crass: just a word of advice Ominous. Quit while your A-HEAD!
and then he punts him
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Artie: That's just what I said.
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no worries artie knowing most dum ego testical maniacs inventions Β always back fire on them ^^
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Craas: Remember me, Artie? When I killed your brother... (voice gets more high pitched) I talked... JUST... LIKE... THIS!!!
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Artie: Ok, first of all, You've never even met my brother, let alone killed him. Also, you don't speak like that. Β Β And finally, you're nuts if you think killing me is going to make you the hero!
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Craas: Oh, yeah! Watch me!!! (proceeds to buzzsaw Artie)
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Artie: Oh Jeez.Β Β
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*Then, Delta swings by, and uses a special rust blaster to rust Craas's buzzsaw.*
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I imaginingΒ Ominous's severed head Yelling "GIVE ME BACKΒ MY BODY!"
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And now I'm imagining our heroes keeping his head in a jar like Lordgenome.
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it could be funny if at the end their both arguing in prison.
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That's not how my vision would play out.
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how would your vision play out then?
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The good guys use him as their new computer.
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