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Every movementEngrained in my mind
A path of destruction
Land marked by your touches
I do it for love
You love what I do
Dilation, overlooking, my
Breath is hard to catch
Your madness starts to surface
Something my love can't match
With your anticipating gaze
How can't I give consent?
Agony on impact, hate,
Almost bearable again
Iβve built love around a sadist
And it wonβt let me escape
Intertwining power holds me
In the grip of sanctioned rape
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Comments: 15
PoisonHearts [2005-03-21 10:50:42 +0000 UTC]
Well done, B Chan! It's very poetic-ish and powerful.
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Crimson-Stains [2005-03-21 03:52:57 +0000 UTC]
i really love the way you write. So powerful...
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britty-chan In reply to Crimson-Stains [2005-03-22 03:32:53 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thanks hun!
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Lost-and-Crying [2005-03-21 02:57:03 +0000 UTC]
I can paint a picture from that poem. Good job.
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britty-chan In reply to bouncing-splitpin [2005-03-22 03:31:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for the fav ^_^
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bouncing-splitpin In reply to britty-chan [2005-03-22 15:01:45 +0000 UTC]
tis ok it was needed
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Ephemeral-Vampyre [2005-03-20 21:55:57 +0000 UTC]
Ooo...nice concept
Intertwining power holds me
In the grip of sanctioned rape
good end lines as well.
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britty-chan In reply to Ephemeral-Vampyre [2005-03-22 03:38:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it
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britty-chan In reply to MortuusAtrum [2005-03-20 16:49:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I appreciate the fav
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