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this young Scott called Hunter was sent by the lord of his land. to prove his worth to his clan. to slay what the lord was calling a "beast" or "demon" he tried to questioning stating " but lord. the beast hasn't done ANYTHING. would you have us kill a wolf that just made its home in our lands but not disturb or confront us in anyway ?" and that, is why he was sent to do the deed. becuase he questioned the lord of the land. and by himself. the lord was expecting him to be dead and not hear of questioning tone again.Β
the young swordsman tentatively entered the ruins of Lock Urn Castle he could feel a presence and it was not human and it was following him. he went to the depths of the castle, after a short while a soft voice crept up behind him " so. they sent someone to try kill me " Hunter jolted and turned about to pull his blade from its scabbard but halter seeing the inhuman but somehow, beautiful creature looking away from him but not posing any threat it's body almost coiled around the hole room "well go head are you going to do your 'noble deed' human" she said like she had no resolve asif she had just gave up trying to live where she is not hunted " my lord wants me to kill you. as you guessed... but, i can't understand why, you haven't done anything to us, but if a go back and without killing you. i will probably be banished and die in a week or two, but i don't want to hurt someone who has done nothing wrong" her head tilted and she focused in on him. she could see his hand clung to the scabbard of his blade, but what really threw her off, is he said SOMEONE and not SOMETHING. he slowly started coiling around him and started coming closer but he didn't flinch " your not afraid... it is nice to see someone who is not afraid. for once" she gently took hold of his sword and before he knew it her long body coiled around him but he didn't really fight back as she completely immobilized him and took hold of his face with one hand and one over his shoulder and said " run away from it. run away with me, i don't want to be alone, and you don't seem to want to be there with people controlling your choices. so come with me" he looked away . unknowing what to say and what to do. but after contemplating. feeling somehow comforted in the coils of this naga creature he asked " whats your name... I'm Hunter Macintosh" she smiled softly and strokes his cheek " Kitanie, so, whats your decision " she asked slithering ever so close to him fishing for his reply.
ANNNNNND you willl find out his answer in the NEXT drawing i plan of doing of these two >:] MWAHAHAHAHA AINT I EVIL EHEHEHEHEH
but tbh you all know where this is headed.. its me cmon uwu
on and artistic note. all the brushes here i made myself XD no kidding. the chain mail. the scales. all brashes i made in a couple minuets. see a need fill a needΒ
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Comments: 100
brokencreation In reply to ??? [2018-04-14 18:31:15 +0000 UTC]
Pretty glad my parents where both rather chill with my life choices 8U
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brokencreation In reply to ArcanumTwilight [2016-04-20 23:23:48 +0000 UTC]
Thaaaanks 8D
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risingstar1011 [2015-02-08 20:53:42 +0000 UTC]
You've done an incredible job capturing the guilt and disappointment on Hunter. His entire culture from the king on down values little more than brute strength, and to even question his mission to kill a 'beast' that literally has done no harm at all likely almost got him executed.
And now here he is - face to face with a 'beast' that is clearly not a dumb animal. He can't even look her in the eyes because he feels like such a clod for having come with the intention of killing her. He feels shame for his intentions, for 'dishonoring' his family/clan/kingdom, for not defeating her in a fight...and he's dealing with all these emotions with not much time to think.
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brokencreation In reply to risingstar1011 [2015-02-12 10:38:25 +0000 UTC]
That was what I was going for and I'm happy it came across 8D.
and he ends up making his choice -w-Β Β
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grinningdog321 [2014-10-12 21:37:59 +0000 UTC]
well now im going to go hunt the picture down, I would like to see this as a countinuing series.
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brokencreation In reply to grinningdog321 [2014-10-13 18:36:23 +0000 UTC]
The second one is in my gallery. anotehr one with them in a tree but have not drawn them for some timeΒ
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SIERRA-116 [2014-08-14 13:37:28 +0000 UTC]
You think I could rewrite this description, so it's better? Not different, just better written.
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brokencreation In reply to SIERRA-116 [2014-08-14 14:08:43 +0000 UTC]
sure okay. though it may be a waisted effort as this drawings popularity peek has passed mate. not many people will see it nowΒ
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SIERRA-116 In reply to brokencreation [2014-08-15 00:55:32 +0000 UTC]
Eh, still gonna. I'll note it to you when I get around to it.
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brokencreation In reply to kaidg [2014-07-03 12:21:04 +0000 UTC]
may do another of these two at some point if i have the right ideaΒ
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Fierce-Dities-Link [2014-05-08 18:33:41 +0000 UTC]
I'm loving this, for a short piece of a story, it's Very well written! Great work pal!
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brokencreation In reply to Fierce-Dities-Link [2014-05-09 11:03:54 +0000 UTC]
I had it re written by some who can English better than myself XD
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Fierce-Dities-Link In reply to brokencreation [2014-05-10 01:54:07 +0000 UTC]
I would love to do a story for it myself, but i doubt i could get it anywhere near this good.
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furyfire22 [2014-04-12 05:32:20 +0000 UTC]
Really nice story. and nice character design.
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dragon-man13 [2014-04-07 21:56:11 +0000 UTC]
this is very nice and quite adorable. and darn it....you got me there in your comment.
but about your art work now
you really have done a really nice work in your character posture. i also really like the nice facial expression on both of em.
Another part in your art work that I love is the great color that you have achieve.
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brokencreation In reply to dragon-man13 [2014-04-08 03:50:07 +0000 UTC]
i seem to have my moments but colours are by far my strongest attribute to my work
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dragon-man13 In reply to brokencreation [2014-04-09 03:00:43 +0000 UTC]
yep i see this. certainly keep it up
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Goldham92 In reply to brokencreation [2014-02-12 16:28:58 +0000 UTC]
yea. wait... I missed the WEDDING!!! maaaaannnn....
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brokencreation In reply to amazoness-king [2014-01-27 12:19:39 +0000 UTC]
much snake. very Scottish, so sexy ...wow
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Wanderer619 [2013-11-05 01:56:59 +0000 UTC]
Nice Pic & Description!!
I must know what happens!
*watches*
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brokencreation In reply to Wanderer619 [2013-11-06 13:48:23 +0000 UTC]
there is already a sequal ewe
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Wanderer619 In reply to brokencreation [2013-11-06 15:42:34 +0000 UTC]
I saw it, well done on it aswell!
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vevans0009 [2013-11-04 16:42:05 +0000 UTC]
I seeΒ twoΒ awesome and gorgeous people in this pic!!!Β
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brokencreation In reply to vevans0009 [2013-11-04 17:10:28 +0000 UTC]
awww thanks nwnΒ
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Eragon007 [2013-11-02 19:03:49 +0000 UTC]
wow, an amazing picture with an amazing story! doudle win!
and a sequel? triple win!
great work
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