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Published: 2018-03-06 04:11:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 421; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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dictionary poem.i've been having a lot of difficulty with sleep, lately.
it's all teeth and decay and bees. i don't know.
this is messy but it is what it isΒ
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!!!!!! thank you so much !Β
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Yeah, SP is nobody's idea of fun.
Well done here.
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Not at all.
+ thank you so very much ! i very much appreciate that : )
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Interesting. Were the lines found in the dictionary, or just made to look like an entry?
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the dictionary aspect was concept only! lines are original content, it was just made to look like an entry for sleep paralysis.
glad you found this interesting! thank you so much for reading!
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You're welcome.
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holy SHIT this is beautiful. your poetry is always so lovely and the dictionary style suits it so well. thank you for sharing
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thank you so much! i've been playing around with it a bit and hope to post some more with this style soon! : B
thank you again, i appreciate the feedback!
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i've never had sleep paralysis but this makes me 1000x more terrified of it
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i'm sorry to add to the terror jkfdhkjdhgkfjdhgjkdhgkjd
i wish i could say it doesn't scare me, but it really does. i really hope you never experience it!
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no omg you're fine <3333
and thank you
i hope it doesn't happen too often for you and that you're okay <3
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sleep is weird..Β i get trapped in steadily worsening nightmares but at least it hasn't been paralysis while awake for a while.
here's hoping for better sleep for you soon
the poem is good, really good
just unfortunate that it's a true story
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thank you so much for the kindness !!! i'm glad you liked the piece as well !!! <3Β
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Instead of sleeping you fall into sleeping paralysis? Or do you wake up and find yourself locked in such a state?
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i usually wake up from a dream and get caught in it, rather abruptly, kind of like---
mm, the feeling when you trip/fall in your sleep and you jerk awake ?
except when i jerk awake i can't really move.Β
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Try holding your breath, closing the pathway with your tongue! (Breathing in but not letting the air go beyond the mouth to the lungs) I've only experienced that kind of SP 2-3 times but I trust the method :3
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