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Name : Broken
Age : Immortal\Unknown
Likes : Nature, being alone and flying around
Dislikes : needles, medicine and mary sue stuff
Fun facts :
~Her mom was called Blue Hope.
~She is able to use magic.
~Before she got injected with the stuff that made her eye go crazy she actually had a different color palette
~She can fly and run incredibly fast
Biography :
I was born in an dark cage, i can barely remember my mom. She did always seem frightened of each sound that we heard. The cage wasn´t big but we could manage. Suddenly i heard someone walking. My moms eyes widened and the colt opened one of the sides of the cage. A blinding light shone in my eyes. As soon as my eyes got used to the light i was able to see the shape of the stallion standing in the opening. He grabbed me and took me away from my mom. She screamed but the stallion didn´t care and closed the cage again. I was so scared, i didn´t know what to do but the stallion took me to a smaller cage and threw me in. He closed the cage and it got dark again. It was cold... i was frightened and started crying and screaming for my mom. Suddenly the cage opened again and the stallion came in. He slapped me and told me to be quiet or he would murder me and my mom. He left and the silence was horrible. I laid down and looked at the tiny spot of light on the iron floor of my cage. I slowly drifted off to sleep.
I woke up to a crackling sound, the cage was opened by a different stallion. He placed two bowls in front of me and left. I looked at the bowls, there was water and food in them. I refused to eat or drink. After about 1 hour a stallion in a white coat took me to a laboratory. They injected me with a weird kind of fluid. It burned in my veins. They got me back to my cage. The pain was making me cry. And the pain got worse and worse. I feared that i would die. Then everything turned black.
My dreams were vague but i can remember them. There was a shadow... it followed me. Then everything started burning. The room was filled with flames. I screamed and the shadow appeared again. I woke up crying and my veins were still burning. After another 5 hours the pain faded. I was so thirsty... i looked at the bowl and screamed. My right eye, it was black! The iris was a glowing red and there were red veins visible at the edge of my eye. I looked at my hooves and they had red markings. They weren´t there before... The stallion with the white coat opened my cage and looked concerned at first. Then he saw my eye and laughed. He told me to follow him. We walked though a big hall. then he stopped and made me look in a mirror. I changed... my hooves had the markings and my wings turned red and got markings. My right eye looked horrific and my left eye turned to a pale red as well. My hair became a gradient... it was black at first but there was red too... what happened to me!?
They kept me in my cage for another couple months. There was anger flowing inside me. Why me? Why are they doing this to me? My right eye started to burn and suddenly my right front hoof got a glowing mist around it. Suddenly the door of my cage made a sound. I looked up and felt more anger. The door blew up. I was shocked and looked at my hoof again. It was normal again and my eye stopped burning. I got up and stepped out of my cage. I looked around and saw more cages around me. There were wails from some of them. I started to run towards a section i remembered from when i was younger. The section where my mom stayed. I picked up her scent and opened up her cage. She was in there but when she looked up she screamed.'Mom its okay, its me remember?'' She pushed herself to the back of her cage and screamed : ''Get away from me!! You... Monster!!!!'' i felt my heart break and love became anger. My eye burned and started glowing. I turned and walked away. A bunch of guards noticed i was on the loose and tried to capture me. I kept walking. Each of them who got close were pushed away or killed by my anger. I noticed an exit and got out of the building.
Some guards emerged from the exit behind me and shot at me. I turned to face them and my eye was glowing again. The bullets bounced away from me and flew back to the guards. They screamed when they saw my eye. I turned and walked away. I spreaded my wings. i've never flown before... I looked up and flapped my wings. It worked and i got an incredible speed. I dove back to the ground and started to run. I was fast... too fast, this couldn't be normal. Then i realized something, that fluid, it gave me speed and magic? It must have... i dont know how to control it though. I found a abandoned shed and took shelter, i found an eyepatch and painted a broken heart on it. I covered my right eye with it. People will fear me, and i will be forever alone. I dont have a name... i've been known for NR666. From this day on, i will be called Broken, for the way my hope and heart were broken.
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Character and art are mine
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Comments: 13
KingHipsterBoy [2017-01-28 23:12:20 +0000 UTC]
So, for the art trade I was wondering if I could do an animatic with her since I want to work on doing them more often.
Do you have a song in mind for her?
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BrokenHells In reply to KingHipsterBoy [2017-01-29 20:07:43 +0000 UTC]
wow sure ^^
Can i ask... what is your youtube channel?
And idk if you like the song but she's pretty much based on it so...
www.youtube.com/watch?v=7mkePU…
There ya go. For more info about her that might give you inspiration just read her backstory ^^
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KingHipsterBoy In reply to BrokenHells [2017-01-29 20:50:25 +0000 UTC]
I'm not that active on youtube but I really wanna try this. Thanks!
www.youtube.com/channel/UCuuOU…
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BrokenHells In reply to KingHipsterBoy [2017-01-30 06:39:46 +0000 UTC]
Its okay OwO
And you just got a subscriber ^^
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BrokenHells In reply to meownchkin [2017-01-27 06:27:06 +0000 UTC]
Tysm! And yes you can draw her ^^
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