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Published: 2008-07-16 03:50:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 2146; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 62
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Un trabajo que no me salió como hubiera querido... pero en fin.Related content
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QUE BELLO!!!, ESPECTACULAR EL DELINEADO DE LAS VENAS, ES ASOMBROSO EL DETALLE!
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I appreciate how much time rendering all the grass
took. That dedication paid off and sells the piece for me. !Perfecto!
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Thanks... but in fact I ended up very dissatisfied with this one. Almost everything in this drawing is not what I had in mind... except the rocks.
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I understand. I find not being able to recreate what I see in my mind is frustrating. I push myself to one day achieve that as well.
I always ask of all who visit if they would be hard on me. To critique my work so I can Improve. You have skills, it would be a great help to me if you could offer advice. If you have time, of course.
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That's great, is always a excellent way to improve your work. I would offer you advices, but by the time I try to write something, someone has already done it, hehe... well that and the fact that sometimes my poor english doesn't allow me write all the things I have in mind. But anyway, I will give you advices any time a can
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Muchos Gracias! Obviously my spanish is worse than your english, but, my wife is fully Mexican. If you want, respond in spanish. Whatever I can't understand, she can translate. Thanks again, it is a great asset to have your critique.
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El personaje masculino está muy bien, excelente, aunque se ve "artificial" por lo lampiño, a mí me gusta mucho, así como las rocas que le rodean, el hada en cambio, lamento decirlo pero su pose y proporción no me gustan: tiene un torso extraño, tal vz demasiado grueso hacia arriba, los senos son como canicas, las piernas gordas y los brazos delicadísimos, la cabeza diminuta y la pose general es muy poco creativa, personalmente (aquí no tengo la más mínima autoridad pero eso no me detiene en opinar) la sacaría, sin ella el dibujo se vería mucho mejor.
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No lamentes decirlo... la verdad yo haría todo el dibujo de nuevo, jejeje. Lo cierto es que no me salió como quería, y cuando lo terminé, lo único que realmente me dejó safisfecho, fueron las rocas.
Gracias por tu crítica.
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Vaya te quedaste a gusto con la crítica eh? desde luego no dudo de tu parcialidad y tu voluntad constructiva. Pero si con este dibujo te has puesto así, como veas uno de los mios te dará un colapso XDDDD
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The pose of the giant recalls Michelangelo's "Creation of Adam" from the Sistine Chapel...Beautiful work!
Yeah, I agree with the above comments--it's amazing that you manage to keep your drawings so crisp and clean, even with the blending tool.
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You're right... I didn't notice that, hehe, I guess I didn't have a "creation" in mind 
Thanks for your coment
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I don't think so... but thanks anyway
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whoa nice!!!
how big is it really?
and how do you manage to keep it so.. clean? i smudge the hell out of my stuff, usually...
very well done, anyway
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I just try to be careful. I usually use fumino pencils to blur the graphite pencil (this thing [link] , I dont know how are they called in english), and I also use a piece of paper or something between my hand and the paper in wich I'm drawing, to not smudge my work.
The sice of that drawing is about 60 x 35 cm.
(sorry for my poor english)
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yes, we have those here in israel as well. (i don't know what they're called though, either, lol)
and well, i do try to be careful, and even put paper under my arm as well - but to no avail. oh well, practice makes perfect i guess.
thanks for the reply
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